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Thank you for your feedback. To tell whether a word has a formal tone or a casual tone is still difficult for me, so your detailed comments were very helpful!
Thank you for your detailed feedback. I learned a lot.
Dear MessageMentor, I am grateful that your corrections and revisions to my writing has so much information. I am sorry that it took me a while to reply, as it was a lot of information for me, I couldn't just reply saying "thank you". As you pointed out I admit that my choice of words were not appropriate for writing, my dilemma is there is a cap for the word count, so, I often have to make a do to try stay under it, that sometimes makes me use shorten forms. Anyways, it was great that my writing was found and corrected by you for the first time. This will be added to my favorite work to come back to from time to time to make sure the advice you gave are fully digested! Thank you,
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Thank you for your feedback. You gave me very detailed explanations of why I should change some words in my essay!
Dear MessageMenter, As always, thank you for your detailed feedback. I immediately used the word “ avid ” for the next assignment. Kochirakoso itsumoarigatougozaimasu. Thank YOU,too. Until soon, Ebiharumaki
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Dear MessageMentor, I appreciate your advice. Have a nice weekend. Best regards, Mashroom
Hello MessageMentor sensei Thank you for your detailed explanations. Yes, I do need to read more books and sentences. I’ve just started to read some books written in English. I want to improve the expressions. Thank you again.
Thank you for your feedback! Following your advice, I will try to compose sentences with fewer and clearer words in the future essays.
Thank you very much. Owing to your detailed explanation, I can improve my composition effectively. See you in the next work.
My apologies for the late reply. Thank you for your explanations and suggestions. I look forward to taking your lesson again.
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Thank you very much for the very thoughtful corrections! Your comments are very informative and I’m happy to read it. Thank you.:)
