Thank you very much for teaching, Eden! I'm really glad you always edit my writing so that I can get better further more! I guess you keep traveling. Please let me know when you have interesting news!
Thank you for teaching, Eden! I'm very glad because you don't finish your review, just saying "Well done!" I have a feeling that I can get better very quickly! I googled "Karimabad, Hunza Valley" and saw pictures. They are definitely beautiful! You're lucky you can enjoy such a great landscape. By the way, I wonder why people in that area can live so long. Because of the food or weather? I'm very curious.
Thank you very much for your prompt review. I found that your feedback help me a lot. And I also enjoyed your travel diary too. Hunza valley is one of most peaceful place in Pakistan, people said.I think I would ask you next review soon.
Eden, Thank you for your kind message! I’m glad to hear that my writing is getting better and better. It was a great opportunity to practice how to write an email when I ask a favor to someone. Regarding your travel updates, thank you for telling me your experience! I would never know the truth if you didn’t tell me that. It is very interesting. I agree with your idea because I often feel that the news is not telling us all the truths. I’m glad you are not in danger. Have a great day!
Thank you very much for your advice, Eden. I like your editing style, because I want to make my writing as natural as possible. Particularly, I'm excited about your words "I am simply going to teach you how to express yourself like a native English speaking, university student. I believe that this is the quickest, most efficient way to help you accomplish your goals." I'm going to ask for your review soon! Have a nice travel!
Thank you for correction and creative suggestions. These ideas motivate me a lot!
Thank you for your feedback on my essay! I find all your comments and revisions on my sentences very helpful, because they are based on "Americanized" version. In another words, your editing style very fit what I hoped for. Also, I enjoyed reading your journeys! It is great to communicate with you besides learning. I look forward to seeing you! Thank you again. Hana.O
Thank you for checking and editing my answer!
Hello! Thank you so much. The school is located in Tokyo, within 30-40 minutes from our house. I hope this experience would be helpful in his life. You have been to 54 countries!? WOW!! Amazing! Which country is your favorite so far? Mari
Thank you for checking and editing my answer!
Dear Mr. Eden, I am surprised you have been to 54 countries so far! I completely agree with your thought that "It's so funny how the things we read about in mainstream news are so different than what we see." What kind of image do you have about Japan? If you have an opportunity, you should come to Japan! I hope you will continue to enjoy a wonderful trip! Mashroom
Dear Eden, Thank you for your advanced and sophisticated feedbac! It is so helpful for my study. Regards, JUNn. P.S. I will order Susanna someday.
Eden, Thank you for your suggestions. Don’t worry I won’t feel sad because you correct my writings. I’ve always wanted to know more natural ways of writing. Have a nice day! Mai
Dear Eden, Thank you for your corrections and suggestions. Your advices are very helpful for me. I read your TRAVEL UPDATE. I am interested in your life style. It's scary that the article that some internet news websites say may be a lie. So I think It is very important for us to have ability telling whether it is true or not.
Thank you! Your alternative sentences are very helpful.
