Hello, Maryanne, How are you? It's nice season in the year, we enjoy pleasant weather, fresh greeneries, beautiful flowers. Finally, people go outside without wearing a mask in Japan. I still prefer to wear a mask the inside of a building, in a train and a station. I think it is not for my safety but for comfortableness between people. Thank you for the amendments you made on my essay. Your comments flattered me a lot, and encourage me to write the next. You gave me some good knowledges, like because can't start a sentence, feelings. I hope to see you soon again. Bye for now. Yoko
Thank you for your feedback and comments that help to identify where I can improve!
Thank you for your feedback. Your suggestions were very helpful. You know a lot about Spring Valley School!
Teacher Maryanne san It's very kind of you to take me as a serious student of English. I'm glad to read this. I'm surprised that my self-made phrase "the giving-benefit policy" makes sense. I see "cohesive" is essential for being recognizable to native speakers. One way to make setenses cohesive is using same words, but it's better to avoid repetition, This is the reason why I made this phrase on my own, And the phrase"facing this issue head-on" was moved from "a car crashed head-on." I wasn't sure this combination was used between natives. "Although "of" can indicate a source or origin, "for" can indicate purpose" I get it, "off point," This is exactly what I meant to say. Best regards,
Thank you for your feedback and the tips about how to use intransitive correctly. It is really helpful!
Teacher Maryanne san Thank you for your prompt and concise answers to my question. I think verb's tenses are the most difficult item for the Japanease to learn. I needed to have read your explanations several times before I come to see the meaning of your sentences because your edits are full of natively natural phrases such as "whoever or whatever is performing the action." The action of reading your explanations itself gives me a good chance for learning, which means I am given a chance to learn. In addition above, I'm interested in the nuance of "this", which is appropriate when the reader sees the question. And one more thing, about the verb"estimate", I intended to express my high appreciation to the current chashless payment systems.I was talking about the present now or the past, and not the future. But the "foresee" is new to me and I'll use this verb. Thank you again. Best regards,
Thank you for your suggestions. It’s still difficult for me to tell which words sound formal and which informal, so your feedback was very helpful!
Thank you so much.
Thank you very much!
Thank you for your suggestions. Your explanations were easy to understand, and the alternative phrases you offered me were very helpful!
Thank you Maryanne! I will keep your advice in my mind.
Dear Maryanne, Thank you for your corrections and feedback. Your comments are very useful for me and brave me. Best regards, JUNn.
Thank you very much. This is my second time to ask you to correct my essay. You always check every detail matter . I am very happy. Thank you so much.
Hello Maryanne. How have you been? It's nice to see you here again. Thank you for the amendments you made on my submission. Also, I enjoyed reading your nice comments, thank you. You pointed out my mistakes which I need to understand, also introduced several colloquial expressions, thank you. I'm sure I will see you soon again. Bye for now. yoko
Thank you for your feedback with useful comment and tips as always!
