Dear Madam EstellaSTJ, Hello! I'm Chihiro from Japan. Thank you for your correction of my essay. This work was difficult for me, but I enjoyed writing on essay. I am studying English for my job. My job is trading business so I need skill for English. I have done review of my essay based on your correction. And I have some questions. 1) You said, "limited has the idea of few in the number of things" but I couldn't translate into Japanese well. May I ask you this sentence's meaning? 2) You give me this sentence as an example, "This employee has a very detail-oriented work style." What does "detail-oriented" mean? oriented is "eastern"? 3)I wrote "First, job-sharing changes leaving work to individual discretion into teamwork by multiple people proceeding, and it enables employees to take a day off easily and to share internal knowledge." And you correct "First, job-sharing gives an individual employee discretion to do teamwork with multiple people, to easily take a day off and to engage in the exchange of knowledge." Sorry, this is my fault. I would like to write; During previous times, people had no choice but to do work by individual discretion. Individual discretion is dangerous for routine work because checking function doesn't work. And only representative can deal with some troubles. But, teamwork with multiple people (dividing up tasks), resolve these problem. Individual employee don't have to bear the burden. Job-sharing is also enable employees to easily take a day off and to engage in the exchange of knowledge. I would like to summarize these ideas. How should I express these ideas into simple one-sentence? Sorry for my long message. I hope you are well. Best Regards, Chihiro
