Dear MessageMentor, Thank you very much for your kind corrections and giving me heartful advice. I always learn a lot of things from your corrections and explanations. You suggested alternatives about "stood out with its fresh flavor," as "The grape jelly, especially, stood out with its refreshing sweetness," or "The grape jelly stood out, especially for its vibrant, fresh flavor." Your alternatives are exactly telling what I wanted to say. I wanted to express how special the taste of the grape jelly was. The taste of the grape jelly was the best of all the ingredients. I thought I could express what I felt if I felt really so and was eager to tell it to the readers. You gave me advice, "Keep that level of sincerity and thoughtfulness in your writing," which is a very powerful encouragement and precious to me. I will keep on practice. I am really grateful for your warm support. Best regards, atsuko5
Dear MessageMentor, Thank you for training me as always! I have taken a brief break due to a heavy workload. However, I’ll be back soon! Kindly continue to educate me when I return!! I look forward to learning from you! Sincerely,
Dear MessageMentor, Thank you for educating me as always! I really appreciate your professional feedback! I look forward to your next class! Sincerely,
Dear MessageMentor, Thank you for educating me every day! Your feedback is like a living textbook. I really appreciate you! I look forward to the next class! Many thanks,
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Dear MesageMentor, Thank you for your fascinating class today, as well! I’ll be careful not to use unnecessary words in my writing from now on! I look forward to your next class! Best regards,
Dear MessageMentor, I appreciate your professional classes! In the latest class, I realized the importance of reordering for a better rhythm. Thank you for educating me.:) I look forward to learning from you! Sincerely,
Dear MessageMentor, I'm deeply grateful for your professional classes! Also, I am encouraged by the quotes you give me every day!! Thank you so much! I look forward to your next class.:) Sincerely,
Dear MessageMentor, Your classes are always inspiring!! Thank you for educating me every day! I frequently reorder my sentences for better flow when writing in Japanese, but I find it challenging to do the same in English. Nevertheless, I will make an effort to improve and create sentences with a smoother flow. I look forward to your next class! Sincerely,
Dear MessageMentor, Thank you for educating me every day! I'm able to work on my writing every day while gaining various new knowledge thanks to you! Personaly speaking, I deeply regret taking a so long break (almost 10 years!) from studying English after passing the Eiken exam I was aiming for. That's why I have made it a daily routine to continue submitting assignments in your class. I really appreciate such an opportunity to take your lesson every day. I look forward to learning from you! Sincerely,
Dear MessageMentor, Thank you for educating and inspiring me in every class! I've just finished reviewing your feedback, which is tremendously effective!! I look forward to your next class! Sincerely,
Dear MessageMentor, I deeply appreciate your thorough feedback, and I feel incredibly fortunate to have the opportunity to learn from you! I look forward to your next class! Sincerely,
Dear MessageMentor, I really appreciate your professional class!! By the end of the year, I'm planning to memorize all the assignments you've corrected for me! I look forward to your next class! Many thanks,
Dear MessageMentor, I am cheered up by your encouragements and praises very much. They give me power and hope to tackle the difficult subject I have when writing English. The alternatives suggested by you are really beautiful such as, "The karaoke machine calculated my singing scores, which were consistently around eighty to ninety—above average—which made me really excited," instead of, "My singing scores calculated by the karaoke machine were around eighty to ninety, higher than average, that made me absolutely excited." The renewed sentence is direct and smooth, conveying the important information naturally. I always learn a lot of things from your corrections and I would like to come up with the right words to express my thoughts properly. I appreciate your kind support. Best regards, atsuko5
Dear MessageMentor, Thank you for educating me every day! All of the English sentences I created were assessed as "良く出来ています," which was a great relief! However, your revised sentences are so sophisticated that I felt motivated to work harder. I've just finished reviewing your feedback, memorizing revised phrases, and completing my review notes! I will make it a daily habit to review today's assignment and check it again in the evening. I look forward to your next class! Sincerely,
