Dear MessageMentor, I appreciate your great class from the bottom of my heart. I have just finished reviewing the latest feedback. I have gained much knowledge thanks to you. I look forward to learning from you! Best regards,
Dear MessageMentor, I really appreciate your class every day! I have just finished reviewing your feedback and compiling notes. This review notebook is extremely valuable to me! Many thanks,
Dear MessageMentor, Thank you for educating me every day! I memorized revised sentences from the latest feedback this morning. Every time after memorizing sentences, I feel like I'm creating an English circuit in my mind, thanks to you! I look forward to your next class! Many thanks,
Dear MessageMentor, Thank you for training me every day! I incorporated your revised phrases into my latest assignment. I look forward to your next class! Many thanks,
Dear MessageMentor, I am always encouraged by your precious comments on my sentences. For example, you praised my way to make sentences, "You have a talent for connecting small, specific observations to larger emotions, making your writing both vivid and relatable". I was really cheered up by this comment. I haven't noticed my writing is relatable to somebody until you pointed it. I feel healed as I imagine some larger emotions in my mind after seeing something that moves me. I try to express my feeling in paragraph, then I am tremendously happy if I can successfully do it. I just have such spirits, but I have a lack of usages of words and expressions to explain properly. I am impressed by your beautiful alternatives, thinking they are exactly what I wanted to say. I would like to improve my English step by step. I am grateful for your kind support. Best regards, atsuko5
Dear MessageMentor, Thank you for educating me every day! Learning revised phrases feels like training for my brain, and it's enjoyable!! I really appreciate you. I look forward to your next class! Many thanks,
Dear MessageMentor, I always appreciate your professional feedback! I'm sure learning English requires patience. So I will continue to work hard! Sincerely,
Dear MessageMentor, Thank you very much for your corrections and suggesting alternatives. My sentences improved remarkably with them. It is not easy for me to come up with the exact words that fit the sentences and I don't even know the suggested words. However, I will continue to memorize each new word. My steps may be slow, but I want to go without stopping. In fact, memorizing new words is a great fun for me as I like making some vocabulary books. I suppose I am fond of doing such detail works. I am always grateful for your warm support. Best regards, atsuko5
Dear MessageMentor, I really appreciate your fantastic class!! I have been encouraged by the quotes. I felt so happy because today's quote had a very Japanese feel!! (‘After winning, tighten your helmet’) I am grateful for being able to take your lessons every day! Sincerely,
Dear MessageMentor, Thank you very much for your correcting and suggesting alternatives. I learn a lot of things from your corrections as always. As for, "My sister seemed to be fond of the beautiful tearoom and the fantastic English house," you suggested, "My sister enjoyed the charming tearoom and the elegant English house." I think, "enjoyed" is certainly better instead of, "seemed to be fond of". I like "charming" and "elegant," as they make the sentence much clearer. I need a sense to come up with those adjectives. I would like to acquire this kind of sense. Thank you very much for your encouragements in Japanese. I felt very close to you. My journey will be long, but I enjoy each step. I am happy to be expected what essay will come next by you. I am always grateful for your kind support. Best regards, atsuko5
Dear MessageMentor, Thank you very much for teaching me that expanding on my reasoning or refining my word choice is important for promoting my sentences. I noticed that my sentences were lack of reasoning after reading your explanation. For example, you suggested alternatives, "The Japanese government should substantially increase its investment in education to improve the quality and accessibility of learning across the country." By adding, "to improve the quality and accessibility of learning across the country," the sentence became clear enough to communicate the exact meaning of the sentence. I realized the importance of stating the reason why I mentioned my opinion. Perhaps I have been making the same mistakes since I was a university student. I understood clearly that my sentence would be more persuasive with adequate reasoning. I will pay attention to tell the reasons to my statements to make my sentences more understandable and assertive. I am happy that I could notice that. What's more, I would like to tell my pleasure that we both have the same sensibility when meeting something impressive. About the latest essay, you mentioned we're on the same wavelength as I appreciate the phrase, "The crystal curtain sparkled with a bittersweet beauty." I like this feeling when I meet the same internal reactions to something moving with someone. I admire your sensibility so much and I am happy to be able to meet you. I am always grateful for your warm support. Best regards, atsuko5
Dear MessageMentor, Thank you very much for your correcting and suggesting alternatives. To choose the correct tense is confusing. However, I think I will be better at choosing the correct tense after I exercise a lot. In the corrected sentence, "I made up my mind not to buy anything because I had run out of money," I can understand clearly that the running out of money happened before my decision as you explained. I need to exercise writing correct tense like this. I was pleased that you complimented me for my skill to turn a small moment into something interesting and detailed. Your kind encouragement gives me power. I like your quote, " The man who moves a mountain begins by carrying away small stone." Especially, I was moved by your explanation, "Every single piece you've written, each word you've carefully chosen, is like carrying away a small stone. It might feel like a slow process at times, but all these small steps are leading to something much bigger." I hope so. I would like to continue my every day practice like moving little stone, and I would like to reach a place where I see the mountain becoming small. Thank you very much for giving me precious comments. They help me think deeply and calmly, showing me the way I could proceed. I am really grateful for your warm support. Best regards, atsuko5
Dear MessageMentor. Thank you for your detailed feedback! Although picture description is still challenging for me, I think I’m getting the hang of it thanks to you! I took on the challenge of writing the third essay. I’m looking forward to learning from you! Sincerely,
Dear MessageMentor, Thank you for the useful advice as always! I'm sure it'll help me improve my English.:) I'm excited for the next lesson！ Sincerely,
Dear MessageMentor, Thank you very much for your corrections and thoughtful warm advises. Your words really encourage me. In the message box above, you said, "Keep trusting your instincts, and don’t be afraid to explore even deeper in your writing. You’re on a great path!" I was moved by this comment as it shows me the road that I can proceed as a writer. I like your alternatives. For example, instead of writing "She bought the presents for us there," you suggested, "She bought the gifts for us while she was in Australia, as a way to show her appreciation." I was impressed with your adding, "as a way to show her appreciation." I thought this adding could be come up with if I think calmly and deeply to express in better thoughts. I should be kind and honest to both reader and myself, then, good expressions may come to my mind. You teach me how to write in good faith. That state of mind enables me to write what I really want to say. I like my journey to become a good writer. You made my will stronger. I am grateful for your warm support. Best regards, atsuko5
