Dear MessageMentor, Thank you for your corrections and suggesting alternatives. Your alternatives always cheer me up, and I feel satisfied with the renewed sentences. For me, to come up with those detailed expressions is quite difficult. However, I think I am getting better at writing English with a good flow. I was surprised that you worked as a cook, and I thought you might be a good cook! I like cooking even though I make mistakes many times. I felt familiar with you. I will write about cooking sometimes. I appreciate your kind support. Best regards, atsuko5
Dear MessageMentor, Thank you very much for your kind corrections and suggesting alternatives. They are so helpful to improve my sentences. Your alternatives make my sentence more direct and meaningful, which I really appreciate. Your kind words and quotes truly encourage me. I thought I could trust me and continue my journey from now on. I highly respect your warm and kind way of thinking. I am always grateful for your kind support. Best regards, atsuko5
Dear MessageMentor, Thank you very much for your kind correcting and suggesting alternatives. They improved my sentences and gave me power to try to write again. I am always impressed by your alternatives, because they make my sentences reborn and shine brightly. They are really beautiful and vivid. I try to create the sentences that could express my feeling while studying the usages of words and grammar, so it is quite difficult to do both of them fluently at the same time. Sometimes I am about to give up pursuing my aim to be a fluent English writer. However, as I read your beautiful alternatives and encouragements, I recover my courage and want to write again. I also appreciate your quotes every time. I would like to continue my journey and progress little by little. I am always grateful for your warm support. Best regards, atsuko5
Dear Message Mentor Thank you for the detail corrections. I'm so excited to read your comments. I really appreciate that you refined my sentences. I'm definitely going to write them down. I'll keep going. Sincerely, From Lavender 46516
Dear MessageMentor, I truly appreciate your classes. Even during busy times, by reciting revised sentences, I can maintain my English language pathways, which is very helpful. I look forward to your next class. Sincerely,
Dear MessageMentor, Thank you very much for your correcting and suggesting alternatives. I was impressed with them, as they really effectively improve my sentences. I was also moved by your advice that I should add more details to my sentences. I think the reason why I didn't come up with the details was because I didn't think extendedly enough about the feeling I tried to explain. I want to write sentences that have a strong message and I want to draw reader's interests. I think I need to ponder more deeply what to write when I try to express my feelings. I need to do so besides increasing my vocabularies. Your suggesting alternatives gives me a lot of hints. I am always grateful for your kinds support. Best regards, atsuko5
Dear MessageMentor, Thank you for your kind corrections and suggesting alternatives. They improved my sentences so much. I have a lot of wills to express my thoughts and feelings well, but my vocabularies and grammar are insufficient. I always study the grammar and pay attentions to create each stories at the same time, but I tend to get absorbed in developing new ideas for next story. Writing is very fun for me, and your suggestions and encouragements make it more interesting. I appreciate the quotation that you gave for me. It encouraged me a lot, as it is saying that even the routine holds something special. I like discovering something nice in every day routines that makes my life shine! I am always grateful for your warm support. Best regards, atsuko5
MessageMentor, thank you for careful explanation. Your advice makes my writing smoother and simpler. I will try harder to improve my English skills.
Dear MessageMentor, I am very pleased that you encouraged me to keep up making efforts to be advanced in writing English. Your kind words really cheered me up, and I thought I will continue this exercise to pursue my goal. I am grateful for your kind and warm support. You always powerfully guide me to the right usage of English, which makes my backbones. Your explanations are my important textbook. I will do my best at English. Best regards, atsuko5
Thank you very much for your detailed explanation. This is the first time I’ve received such a thorough breakdown, and it was incredibly educational. Additionally, your encouraging words have helped boost my motivation to continue studying. I'd like you to check and correct my sentences again. I really appreciate it. Thank you very much.
Dear MessageMentor, Thank you for your kind corrections and giving me warm advice. They encouraged me a lot. To write native-sounding sentences is very difficult for me, but it would be a great pleasure to master it. As you said, I would like to continue quiet and steady steps every day. I always appreciate your warm support. Best regards, atsuko5
Dear MessageMentor, Thank you very much for your kind corrections and giving me heartful advice. I always learn a lot of things from your corrections and explanations. You suggested alternatives about "stood out with its fresh flavor," as "The grape jelly, especially, stood out with its refreshing sweetness," or "The grape jelly stood out, especially for its vibrant, fresh flavor." Your alternatives are exactly telling what I wanted to say. I wanted to express how special the taste of the grape jelly was. The taste of the grape jelly was the best of all the ingredients. I thought I could express what I felt if I felt really so and was eager to tell it to the readers. You gave me advice, "Keep that level of sincerity and thoughtfulness in your writing," which is a very powerful encouragement and precious to me. I will keep on practice. I am really grateful for your warm support. Best regards, atsuko5
Dear MessageMentor, Thank you for training me as always! I have taken a brief break due to a heavy workload. However, I’ll be back soon! Kindly continue to educate me when I return!! I look forward to learning from you! Sincerely,
Dear MessageMentor, Thank you for educating me as always! I really appreciate your professional feedback! I look forward to your next class! Sincerely,
Dear MessageMentor, Thank you for educating me every day! Your feedback is like a living textbook. I really appreciate you! I look forward to the next class! Many thanks,
