Dear Peter, Thank you for your detailed feedback. Your suggestions are very helpful to me. I'll keep practising this writing training. Best regards, Taka
Thank you so much for your corrections and explanations! According to the 2nd sentence, I learned the collocations "become interested in" and "show interested in." I will use them in the next chance. Best regards.
Thank you so much for your corrections and explanations! I learned the importance of the word order in a sentence. Best regards.
Thank you so much for your corrections and explanations! According to the 1st sentence, I learned the past form of the verb "hang" and "hanged" is used for very specific situations. According to the 2nd sentence, I learned the expression "play a music." Best regards.
