Dear Peter, In Japan, Spring is around the corner. As always, your advice is very fruitful. Thank you for our support! Mashroom
Dear Teacher Peter, Thank you very much for your review and answers. I took note of the difference between "use of force" and "political violence". Wishing you a good day. Warm regards, Haruka
De ar Teacher Peter, Thank you for your review and answers. Also, I was pleasantly surprised by the compliment. In the 9th sentence, I suppose I wanted to start with by but entirely forgot that. Wish you have a good day. Kind regards, Haruka
Dear Teacher Peter, Thank you very much for your review and answers. I did not know "normal" is a nuanced word while "standard" is more objective. Also, I learned the expression "a four-day work week". Wishing you a good day. Warm regards, Haruka
Dear Peter, I appreciate your advice!
Hello Peter Thank you for your review. I confess, I used to using similar sentences to my work. You advised me about not starting with conjunctions the last time, but I forgot to do it at this time. I will not make the mistake from now on. Please continue to support me. Kind regards, YM
Dear Teacher Peter, Thank you very much for your review. Some expressions I learned from this entry are; - blood "flow" instead of "current" - in a sitting position - maintain a good health Have a good weekend. Warm regards, Haruka
Dear Teacher Peter, Thank you very much for your review. Regarding the example in the first paragraph, I originally wrote "a man" in place of "a person" in the fifth sentence. Then during my self-review, I realized women can act crazy as you suggested but overlooked that bit in the sixth sentence. My mistake! I will let you know about my latest score, once it becomes available by Thursday. Warm regards, Haruka
It's a big progress if I became able to write English even if it's just a little. I really appreciate it.
My writing has improved thanks to your corrections carefully. I will do my best. Thank you very much.
I finally began to understand that simple is the best. I will do my best! Thank you very much.
Dear Peter, Thank you for your advice. Have a nice weekend!
Dear Peter, Thank you for your helpful feedback. Regards, JUNn
Thank you for checking my essay. I have often missed Grammarly and Word choice. I can learn a lot of things from your correction. Kurumayu
Dear Peter, Thank you for checking and correcting my work. I will review it. Best regards, MochiHamu