

Thank you so much for the advice. Is your correction “ Although I’m not sure whether this is because humans have a self-defensive instinct and try to protect themselves or not, however, improvements are repeatedly 〜” right?? Is it okay if I use both words “although “ and “however”in a sentence?

Thank you so much for your kind advice.

Dear Roo90, I'm happy to receive your feedback and I learned more from your amendments. I hope I see you next again. Regards m-yoshiro

Thank you for your corrections and kind comments, Roo90! Also I appreciate that you understood what I wanted to say. Thank you!

Dear Roo90, I'm happy to get your review. I'm also looking forward to receive your feedback next time. Regards m-yoshiro

Dear Roo90, Thank you for your feedback. I'm happy to be able to learn more from your adjustments. Regards m-yoshiro

Thank you so much for your prompt reply. I understood how to use “at first”.

Thank you so much for the advice. But are “There were no woman” “it has became” correct??? Why?

Thank you for your corrections!

Thank you so much for the thoughtful correction.

I appreciate your quick correction.

Thanks. Hope you get well soon.

Thank you for coaching me, Yuichi

Thank you for your corrections and kind comments, Ms Roo90! Yes, it’s awesome how different people look without their glasses.:) Thank you very much!

Thank you for the advice you gave me. My big test is just around the corner! I have to study harder!
