Dear Teacher DewiCodex san Thank you for your answer to my question about "anyone." I see the point when you wrote - while "anyone" means all or any part of the group,-. At least, one person of the group and without exception if one agrees with the condition, namely owning real estates. > …such as 'As the government of Canada move forward with the tax … =I see the way to expand the sentence with some additional information, with which I'll try it next. > please maintain around similar amount of words in each sentence. = I see, and I like the phrase " the aesthetic of the composition." > Chinese investors buying a lot of properties which drove the value up, thus making it hard for the locals to buy houses. = In Japan, they say Chinese money floods into depopulated villages and buys lands and houses, but their money doesn't come on the surface and then later a lot of Chinese people come to the village and occupy the village, becoming like a part of Chinese territory. Some fears it can be an invasion. I don't know the fact, but the nation looks to have an intention to increase its territory. > Your writing skill is excellent and will surely improve as you practice more composition. = I'm happy to read this. I'm honored by your assess. Best Regards, ie1133
Thank you so much for your feedback! I was always pleased to read it, and it greatly helps improve my composition. Thank you !
Thank you so much for your prompt response. I really appreciate the effort you had made to improve my essay.
Dear DewiCodex Thank you for your review. Your explanation is informative and easy to understand for me. To be honest, it is really difficult for me to choose the words and phrases which sound more "natural", but I will try to learn gradually. I'm looking forward to seeing you next time. Best Regards, Tucker
Thank you for the feedback and editing, which greatly helps my composition. Your corrections and explanations are clean, clear, concise and easy for me to understand. Thank you so much.
Dear Dewi Codex, I appreciate you correcting my mistakes, and you giving me heartwarming words. I studied a lot from you. Thank you so much!
Dear DewiCodex, Hello, I've never thought I would be returned my essays so quickly! I'm so happy! I really appreciate your help. It was fun to read your comments because I couldnot notice them by myself. You advised me; read it aloud, I'll sure to do it and try to improve my essays. Now I'm a fun of IDIY because there are wonderful teachers like you! I'll keep writing! Thank you!
I apologize for the late reply. I’m grateful for your excellent suggestions and clear explanations. I’ll apply what I’ve learned this time to my future composition. I’m looking forward to taking your lesson again!
Dear DewiCodex, Thank you for correcting! I understood about the expressions about paying with credit card. Your corrections helped me understand natural expressions. I’d like to use them in conversations with foreign people! I realize the importance of lectures from native speakers. I learned a lot of awkward English in English textbook in Japan. I’m so happy to get to know IDY and you! Have a good day! See you next time! Sincerely, Takashi0502
Dear DewiCodex, Thank you for checking my sentences and providing feedback. It was a great experience for me since this was the first time to receive an assessment of my English writing from a native speaker. I always try my best in writing, but not quite sure about whether it flows naturally or not. I often check my co-worker's sentences, but nobody checks mine! I think the IDIY system matches my demand perfectly.
Dear Teacher DewiCodex san Thank you for assessing my writing so kindly. >In daily life, to what degree should matters be planned and prepared? = Thank you very much for your informative corrections. I was not able to think of the difference "Things"and"matters" in nuances. Regarding "things", I come up with "How are things with you?", while, as to "matters", "to make matters worse" comes in my mind. Anyway, I understand the usage of "Things"and"matters" is highly related to native language sensibility. ----- >It is a profound question to me. = I see. Present tense is used to describe not only repeated actions but also general truths. This is new to me. ------ >the higher the stress level it creates. = I see. 'Stress' itself measures by levels and is associated with levels. And 'creates' is better for avoiding repetition and in conjunction with the next sentence. ----- >However, at the same time, I'd be happy with the better results. = I understand I need to put 'The' before 'better'. I'v been trying to be careful about 'the'and 'a', but still cannot do well with the articles. --- I am very glad to receive your positive feedback on my compositions. Thank you again. Best Regards, ie1133 /////////////////////////
Thank you very much!! I’ll learn English by reading aloud the exact English sentences that you have corrected.
Thanks for revising my English writing. I’m sorry for late reply. I had a hard week until today and did not have enough time to send you a thank-you message to ou. Your corrections and explanations were clear to learn. I will take our advise of reading my composition of English writing out loud for next time. I hope to work with you again soon!
Thank you for your kind message and correction. I'm happy to got many meaningful ideas and the dictionary you recommend. As you said, I feel that I have to learn more words and idioms, so I will keep studying English more with a thesaurus and IDIY. Thank you very much
Dear DewiCodex, Thank you for your corrections! I learned a lot from you. I’m glad you advised me. I will review and practice reading out loud them many times. See you again! sincerely, Takashi0502
