Thank you for your message. I will try to keep the KISS rule in mind.
Dear, Teacher Desiree. Thank you very much for your correction to my sentences and detailed explanation. In the first sentence, I use "like" as " such as". However, you didn't understand. I'll have to review these sentences. I'm looking forward to taking your corrections again.
Dear, Teacher Desiree. Thank you very much for your correction to my sentences and detailed explanation. Sometimes, I was told that your sentence was complicated and it was difficult to understand. I'll tried to write English sentences more simply. I'm looking forward to taking your corrections again.
Thank you very much for your corrections! I appreciate your naturally written alternatives and glammar explanation!
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Thank you very much for your corrections! I appreciate your glammar explanations!
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Thank you for your correction. I'm sorry that paragraph no,3 is a little bit strange, but your sentence described very well what I want to say. I don't translate my essay from Japanese to English, but I don't have enough vocabulary and examples, so my essay looked strange. I have to read more article or sentences. Thank you again and have a good night!
Dear, Teacher Desiree. Thank you very much for your correction to my sentences and detailed explanation. As your advice, I made a duplicate mistake about "does". I'll try to reduce mistakes like this. I'm looking forward to taking your corrections again.
Thank you so much.
Thank you for your correction. Your commentaries are easy to understand and useful to me. I will keep up with studying English. Kyoko Mori
Dear, Teacher Desiree. Thank you very much for your correction to my sentences and detailed explanation. Sometimes, my teacher told me that my sentences are too long to understand. Then, I'll try to write English sentences shorter than now. I'm looking forward to taking your corrections again.
Thank you so much.
Thank you very much for your corrections!
Dear teacher Desiree, Thank you for your collections and useful advice, Desiree sensei. I will keep it in my mind! See you again soon! Yanta