Dear Susan, Thank you very much for the rewriting and correction, I did not expect to receive so thoroughly written feedback. It was really helpful and educational, beyond the level I was hoping for. I would like to thank you for your kind words too. Let me request your service when I write another piece of writing. Thank you!
Thank you for your kind instructions as always. Some errors I made were basic errors. I should be more careful!! I got to know these; "transportation" is uncountable noun and methods of transport in the singular! We learn American English in school and American spelling is more familiar than British one, but I'll try to adopt it! I look forward to work with you next time!!
Dear Ms Susan, Thank you very much for your really helpful feedback, as always! Your corrections and suggestions are very clear and so easy to understand. I learn many new words, expressions and more commonplace ways to express things. Please take care, and have a lovely day!
Thank you
Thank you so much for your correction again!!
Thank you so much for your correction again! Your explanation is really helpful.
Dear Susan, Thank you for helping me and providing some useful impressions. I hope you will have a wonderful night. Best, Hiroyuki Tsuji
Thanks a lot.
Hi. I have seen your correction to me and learned. Thank you for laughing to my response of the topic on the South Pole!
Thank you.
Thank you so much for your detailed correction. It really helps me!!
Hi, tutor Susan. Thank you for your kind instruction. There is a small discovery. You aren't sure that the tie has not "regimental" pattern, and I wondered why. When I wrote this work, I didn't know what to say this pattern so I googled for words "sloping""pattern". And then I got the answer "regimental pattern". I didn't checked the meaning the word 'regimental". I looked up again and I found out it is red and blue striped pattern(mostly) taken from the British regimental flag! This was new for me! Yes, I agree with you and this tie isn't really regimental pattern, and what I wanted to say is "diagonal stripe". ( I hope this sounds natural) See you next time!
Dear Ms Susan, Thank you very much for your really helpful feedback!! Thank you very much for letting me a lot of useful expressions and alternative expressions. It is very interesting to know that English has such a wide variety of expressions to convey similar things, but in subtle way. More I learn English, more I feel that the language is beautiful.
Thank you.
Thank you so much for your correction, Susan!!
