Dear TeacherRachel san Thank you for your kind advice. Among a lot of tips you kindly extended, two of below interest me very much. 'the train service in Japan' ---I see. I need to put 'the'. I found this phrase without 'the " in the task sentence, so I used it. But in my composition, 'train service' has changed to specific. 'The' is necessary. We don't have an equivalent word to 'the' in Japanese, so it is always difficult to use it right. 'The verb to use is 'to come away' or you could say 'to become loose'.' ---I see, not 'go away'. 'Come' or 'go' are difficult to use. In chosing these two words, Japanese way (thinking direction ) is sometimes contrary to that of English. 'I'm coming to your house. ' 'I'm going to your house. ' Best regards,
Dear TeacherRachel, I appeciate your advice. Have a wonderful weekend. Best regards, Mashroom
Dear TeacherRachel, I appreciate your advice. Have a wonderful Sunday! Best regards, Mashroom
Dear TeacherRachel, I appreciate your advice. Have a nice Sunday. Best regards, Mashroom
Dear TeacherRachel, I appreciate your advice. Have a nice weekend. Best regards, Mashroom
Dear TeacherRache, I apprecaite your advice. Have a nice weekend! Best regards, Mashroom
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Dear TeacherRachel, I appreciate your advice. Have a nice weekend. Best regards, Mashroom
Dear TeacherRachel san I am grateful for your kind corrections and answers. I will review these tips to use them in my composition. The next sentences are impressive to remember: the atmosphere in Japan is more concerned with economic factors such as ones considering tax revenue, labor force and markmet size, but loving a baby unconditionally is more important than economic factors. It is Best regards
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Dear TeacherRachel, I appreciate your advice. Have a nice weekend. Best regards, Mashroom
Dear Rachel Thank you for the corrections. I will remember to leave a space after commas and full stops. Thank you. From Lavender
Thank you for message. your corrections were very clear!
