Dear Roddy. Thank you for your review and very DETAILED explanations! I think you are one of the most generous teachers! I want to write NATURAL English sentences rather than grammatically correct sentences. So, your alternatives and feedbacks always make me motivated and also let me know that I still have a long way to go. What’s more, the fact helps me to keep up the momentum! I look forward to sending you the next episode soon! Have a great weekend! Best wishes, Kohei
Thank you.
Hello Roddy, Thank you for your review and very detailed explanations! Wow, I listen to The Interrupters too! I like their song named Title Holder! Actually, I also love Rancid, Operation ivy and Fishbones and so on. Music always brings people together, doesn’t it? ;) About my writing, actually, I’ve already visited India twice and this is the writing of my trip to India. Sorry for making you confused. BUT I enjoyed learning a lot especially from these notes below!! ・have the confidence I think most English learners in Japan have the same problem as me. The tense about this that you told me is very clear and I completely understand it, thank you! ・To backpack I travelled a lot but I didn’t know we can use this as a verb, Thanks! ・Look vs Seem I didn’t know that we use LOOK only to describe the physical appearance and SEEM is for physical appearance, attitude and opinion. and we should use the present tense to use seem in this situation ・Take a trip (for a long journey) vs Make a trip (for a short journey) and I sent you a continuation of this story yesterday. I’m looking forward to reading your review! Have a great day! Best regards, Kohei
Hello Roddy, Thank you for your very detailed explanation always!! What’s more, your answer to my question about SURPRISE was super clear and makes my English knowledge DEEPER! and this time, I learned a lot from especially these topics below! ・elder lady ---> elderly lady ・the present perfect tense ("has tripped and fallen") ・”fell on her behind” vs “fell on her backside” vs “fell over backwards” ・must be strangers I look forward to submitting you my other compositions and the continuation of my trip to India . Have a great day! Best regards, Kohei
Hello Roddy, Thank you for your review and explanation for each of my mistakes. This time, I learned a lot especially the phrases below. ・from behind ・is making an awkward face ・having her picture taken I feel your review always makes my English improve dramatically. I look forward to showing other compositions to you. Have a great day! Kind regards, Kohei
I’m dreaming of working from anywhere like you, so I am jealous of you. By the way, your work is really beneficial to me. Thanks to your corrections, I learn many things.
Dear Roddy, Thank you for your review and very detailed explanation for your corrections. That ones are very clear and so easy to understand that I'm more curious about the grammar than before. I'll keep your advice in my mind and write other compositions! I look forward to asking you to check my next writing. Have a great one! Kind regards, Kohei
Hi, Roddy Thank you for your very elaborate reviews!! I appreciate your explanations! Actually, I dismissed the difference between non-restrictive ('which') relative clauses and restrictive ('that') relative clauses, but your review made me notice how important it is. I'm gonna write other compositions keeping in mind that there's a difference. Please look forward to seeing my sentence! Thank you always, have a great one!!! Best regards, Kohei
Dear Roddy, I'm great, and you? Thank you for your reviews and very detailed but easy-to-understand explanations about grammar!!!! I always want to truly and deeply understand the grammar, vocabulary and tense, so I really appreciate your feedback. In Tokyo, the leaves on the trees change colour and fall between November and December, so it's later than in your country. It tends to snow in January and February. Your feedback always gets me pumped up for this routine English writing work! Have a great one! Best regards, Kohei
Dear, Roddy Thank you for your very detailed reviews! I REALLY appreciate it! I saw your profile, you like Rock and Reggae music, aren't you? I also really like UK Punk and Reggae and Ska. :) When I visited the UK on my business trip, I went to O2 Academy in Brixton to see the Reggae show. My favourite DJ, Sir David Rodigan, is hosting BBC Radio 1Xtra, and going to his show at Royal Albert Hall is on one of my bucket lists!! Anyway, I'm happy that I found one of the best instructors on IDIY. I'm looking forward to asking you to check my next composition. Have a great weekend! Best regards, Kohei
Dear Roddy, Thank you for your VERY detailed discrimination! I want to broaden my vocab widely so I really appreciate your review style. I’m sure I’m gonna ask you to review my work again! Have a great day! Best regards, Kohei
I think that we don’t use difficult maths in our daily life. Although I study it now, I wonder if I use this knowledge at work.
Dear, Roddy Thank you for your suggestions and detailed explanations! I value a natural way to speak more than grammatical corrections, so I really appreciate it. I definitely ask you to check my works again! Thank you! Kohei
I’m sorry to hear that. I hope you will find the one.
Dear Mr. Roddy, Thank you for your detailed explanation as always. I really admire your professionalism and enthusiasm for work. With warm regards