Dear Tom, How are you? I'm happy to hear from you again here. Thank you for the amendments you made on my submission, I especially appreciate the detailed explanations for every single correction. To my surprise, you are kind enough to look at the previous submission and give me additional advice as below. "because" should NEVER begin a sentence when it's describing something from the preceding sentence. Reading and understanding your message is not easy for me, so, I think I couldn't understand all of them(sorry), but they motivated me to study hard. For example, I don't know how to use commas. I tried to learn from the reasonings you wrote. I will keep in my mind this one, " Introductory clause has to be followed by a comma" The sixth sentence, I wrote " I think that human beings are one of natural creatures." The reason why I added "one of " before "natural creatures" may be just direct translation from the sentence in Japanese that I often speak, meaning that we are not different from natural creatures (wild animals, birds, fish, insects and others) that were born to live in nature. Sorry, this comment disappointed you, but I'm looking forward learning from you again. Until then take care and have a good winter break. Yoko
Dear Tom, Thank you very much for always correcting my writing. Your very detailed explanations are always very helpful and I really appreciate them. I hope you have a happy new year too! Best regards, Sae
Thank you for your feedback with detailed comments and insights that I truly want to learn!
Thank you, as always.
Thank you for your corrections and suggestions. I always appreciate your detailed explanations. I look forward to taking your lesson again.
Dear Tom sensei, How are you doing this weekend? I appreciate your advice and kind message. Have a nice weekend! Mashroom
Thank you for your explanations and suggestions. I learned a lot! I look forward to taking your lesson again.
Thank you for your many messages. In the fact, I noticed the message system today. I carry out a review of my writing.
Thank you for your feedback and informative comments as always!
I am happy to work with you again. Your comments were very helpful.
Thank you for correcting. That was very helpful.
Thank you for sharing your story always!
Thank you for checking my sentence politely. Teacher's advices were my learning. I do my best more. Ayato
Dear Tom-san Thank you for your detail review as usual. It was very informative for me. I’ll keep making an effort to hit 1000 as soon as possible! I’m looking forward to seeing you here. Best Regards, Tucker
My apologies for the late reply. Thank you for your explanations and suggestions. I look forward to taking your lesson again.
