

Thank you for your feedback. I don't think that company sports days value competitiveness so much; many adults are lacking in exercise, so they aren't tough enough to compete anyway! As always, your explanations were easy to follow, and the alternative sentences you offered me were very useful. Thank you again!

Thank you for your feedback. As always, your explanations were easy to follow, and the alternative sentences you offered me were very useful. "Drifted apart" sounds more suitable here as I might be responsible too. I forget to respond the second question. I should have been more careful.

Thank you for your feedback. As always, your detailed explanations were easy to follow, and the alternative sentences you offered me were very useful. Especially, I learned how to use “dedicate.” I will use this word in future essays!

Thank you for your feedback. Your detailed explanations were easy to follow, and the alternative sentences you offered me were very useful. I have read them repeatedly so that I will use them in the future essay!

Thank you for your feedback. Your detailed explanations were easy to follow, and the alternative sentences you offered me were very useful!