Thank you very much for your kind corrections, alternatives and answer to my question. They are really useful for my sentences. I always made mistakes when I tried to express tense correctly. Your explanations are very easy to understand, so now I have acquired tense correctly. As for the job I had applied for, I didn't pass the test unfortunately. However, I applied for another job and took the test. The job is to mark trial English examinations for high-school students. The job test was to mark some trial English examinations practically and must be finished within six days. It was very tough as I have to search the right answer to each student's paper. The trial English examinations included English free compositions. The result will be sent by e-mail on March 26th. I am just waiting for the day to come. The exercises I am doing here were really helpful for the job tests I took. I am really grateful for your kind support!
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Dear Pearl, Thank you for your corrections and kind advice. They are clear and easy to follow. I appreciate the corrected sentences because they are sophisticated so much. I am happy that you enjoyed reading my composition. Unfortunately, the storekeeper wound up the cafe, which I found when I visited there four years ago. I regret not taking any pictures of the cafe. I would like to write those memorable experiences of mine more, and I am happy if you read and correct them. Best regards, atsuko5
Dear Pearl, Thank you very much for correcting my composition and the kind words. Your explanations are very clear and easy to follow. I am encouraged by your kind words so much. I have been thinking that there are ever so many more for me to attain my goal that I could write English naturally. I am very happy if I could become good enough at English in the future. I will continue my effort. I am grateful for your kind support. Best regards, atsuko5
Your advice is concise and easy to understand.Thank you so much.
Thank you for your feedback. As always, your detailed explanations were easy to follow, and the alternative phrases you offerer me were very useful!
