Hell, catymcd, I'm glad to hear from you again, and seems like we have been fine. Thank you for the corrections you made on my essay. Especially, I like the last sentence you wrote, which says "As long as the service is free, people won't take mountain safety seriously enough which may result in additional accidents." Your choice of word, such as 'service' , 'mountain safety' ,'may result in', 'additional accident' are wonderful!! Thank you for changing the miserable sentence into the beautiful one. See you next time, Yoko
dear catymcd, how are you? I see, 'at the time' is a good word. Thank you. Tense in sentences is sometimes difficult to choose. I remember when I was a child like elementary school student, it was said that during exercise or sports people shouldn't take water because it caused problems on the heart. It is opposite to the current advice. I don't know why... I try to drink much water. I believe it's good for my health. Take care and see you next time. Yoko
Hello, catymcd, How are you? You wrote me interesting word choices, like, nor.... , the proximity of , and otherwise. Thank you, they are beyond my knowledge and good to learn for me. Once I went to a cat café with a friend of mine who loves cats. I didn't enjoy the time there. Take care and see you next time. Bye for now. Yoko
Thank you for your helpful corrections.
Thank you for checking my essay!
Teacher catymcd Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
Happy New Year! Thank you for your helpful corrections.
Teacher catymcd Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher catymcd Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
Thank you very much!!
Teacher catymcd Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
Thank you for your helpful corrections.
Thank you for your helpful corrections.
Thank you for your helpful corrections.
Thank you for your helpful corrections and comments.
