Dear teacher Emendatio, Thank you for your detailed corrections!!! I greatly appreciate your kindness. I will do my best to be able to make good use of these advices. Kind regards, Misa
I am pleased to be able to share my diary images. I learned a lot from your comments.
I can express myself more clearly with your comments.
Thank you for correcting my diary entry every time. It's very useful to know many new expressions for me!
Thank you for correcting my diary entry every time. It's very useful to know many new expressions for me!
Dear teacher Emendatio, Thank you for your detailed explanations! I had rested to write English for three months, and my writing skill dropped. However one of my weaknesses is a count noun "as usual. " I have failed it again. I will take care of these words more carefully! Kind regards, Misa
Oh, I should use the word not ‘point’ but ‘place’. And I should use the preposition ‘in’ before ‘the places’. Actually, I’m not good at using prepositions.. Thank you for your checking:)
‘by the time I return home’ is completely fit sentence I want to wite:) And I often make a mistake to use multiple people. And I learnt that I should use ‘nobody knows’. Thank you for your checking:)
I’m sorry, but I don’t understand the sentence you gave me. An attributive noun is a noun that functions as an adjective. An attributive noun modifies another noun that immediately follows it, such as *business* in *business meeting*. But I want to understand that meaning, so I’ll consider about that!! Thank you for your checking:)
Oh, I made a mistake to use the verb. ‘Conclude’ is different meaning from the sentence. ‘Include’ is correct. And I often use the mark roughly. So thanks for telling me that clearly:) Thank you for your checking!
The cause was a hole in a water heater on the fifth floor. Actually, I’m not good at using numbers. But, I understood that! Thanks:) So, you said that I should not use a preposition if I use the verb ‘tell’. It’s difficult! But I have to learn more. Thank you for your kind comments and checking:)
Thank you so much for correcting my English sentences and giving alternative way to write.
Thanks for telling me about adverbs and punctuation clearly...! I understood that:) I hope that you’ll assist my diary soon! Thank you for your checking!
Thank you for your kind message!
I am sorry to reply lately. I didn’t know this page. Thank you very much for your advice. I will study harder.
