Dear Teacher Tama, Thank you for rewording my sixth sentence. You changed my sentence exactly the way I wanted it to mean. By the way, in my previous message to you about Whaling, I used 1,000 AD again. It should have been AD 1,000 as you taught me. I am sorry. Best regards, KTP
Dear Teacher Tama, Thank you very much for explaining in details. I used the word, "whiskers of whales" because that is what we call it in Japanese. I researched it after reading your comment, then I found out that they are not whiskers, but rather filters for food, and they are white and elastic.They were used to make bows for violins and other things before plastic came out. As for the whaling map, it was found in a ruin which dates back to the Yayoi Period (1,000BC, not 1,000AD). Although 15,000 years ago seems unbelievable, that is called the Jyomon Period, and whale bones were found. I am not sure the above are all correct information. I got them from Wikipedia. Just for your information. Regards, Ms. KTP/Used to be KTP2017
Teacher Tama Thank you for correcting my unnatural sentences. Your message and advice always make me motivated!! I'll request you again. Sincerely Zunda
Dear Tama-san, Thank you very much for your correction and tips! Yes, I would like to learn more natural and formal sentence that I can use for business, so your correction is quite helpful and I really appreciate that. I hope I can see you soon!
Dear Teacher Tama, I've never heard of "The Right Honourable" .Thank you for teaching me that. I'm reading "Prince and Pauper" by Mark Twain right now. I has been quite a challenge because of English usage particular in the UK and its old English. I really appreciate thy thorough explanations:-) Best regards, Kiyomi
Thank you, Teacher Tama for your detailed explanations for my mistakes. I am enjoying my new daily routine of writing. Topics have been interesting, and aiming at total of 100words every time is a good practice for me. My immediate goal is to be able to write short pieces clearly and logically without major mistakes. Having a good structure and effective word choice are the next goal. Eventually I want to to be able to entertain or inspire readers with new perspective or information for longer pieces. I appreciate your help!
Dear Tama Thank you for giving me the great advices. I also think most dolls are a little scarery!! Sincerely Zunda
Hello Ms. Tama, Thank you very much for your help! I'm so glad to learn those very useful expressions. As you already know, my understanding of definite article was vague. I know I have to read grammar books though, it always makes me sleepy. Your explanation was very helpful to me. Kind regards, Ayako Nara
Thank you for checking my sentences.
Dear Teacher Tama, Thank you very much for your corrections and message. It was the trial, therefore my first composition at IDIY, and I really enjoyed the process of thinking for writing about the topic. I didn't expect the message, so it was happy surprise! Now I decided to practice writing at IDIY because of this first good experience with you. Thank you very much! Hope I have many opportunities to have you as my teacher in the future. By the way, I am Ms. KTP2017, not Mr. KTP2017;-) Regards.
Dear Teacher Tama Thank you so much for correcting my mistakes. I'll try to be careful for pronouns, nouns and verbs nest time!! Sincerely Zunda
Dear Teacher Tama Thank you so much for correcting my mistakes. I'll try to be careful for pronouns, nouns and verbs nest time!! Sincerely Zunda
Thanks again for correcting my English and giving me some great tips!
Thank you!! I like your correcton way. set favourite: Teacher Tama.
Thank you for reading my sentences! I'm very happy that you made my sentences more natural. Especially, your small changes like 'composed'(9th sentence) and 'time periods'(14th sentence) are so helpful as well as a phrasal verb like 'switch between'. I can also learn a lot from another expression of 8th sentence. I will try to do my best next time. Thank you very much!
