Thank you for your advice on my text. Your example sentences that you taught me are helpful and they realized me the usage of the words that are new to me.
Thank you for correcting my mistakes on my text. Your kind explanation was easy to understand.
Thank you for your advices on my text. I also thank you to teach me with many good examples to my understanding.
Actualy, I wrote SNS as social network system, which is more popular meaning in Japan. However, the teacher in other country understood it means sympathetic nervous system. Thus I can learn the importance of the context. Thank you MissP!(ありがとう)