Thank you for correcting my essay. As you mentioned, gröt was similar to oatmeal. I have not had oatmeal because it is not common in Japan. Thus, when I first saw gröt, I could not figure out whether it was dessert or not for a while. Your explanations were easy to understand and very helpful! Thank you again.
Dear Ashley, Thank you very much for your feedback and message. In Tokyo, it is cooler than usual. I feel better but am a little bit sad that the summer has gone. I think that tattoos are more common in the UK than in Japan. I often see many UK musicians with tattoos for fashions. Although it depends on the type of tattoos, it is strange that I think that western people with tattoos are good but Japanese are bad. Thank you. Best regards, Orange0103
Thank you for your advice for both of my English and cat!!
Thanks for your great correcting and plenty of feedback! Your message made me motivated. I'll keep you posted;)
Thank you for correcting my essay. Your suggestions were easy to understand and very helpful. I think that Japanese rarely begin conversations with asking how someone’s day is going, so this question is always difficult for me to answer when I take a English conversation lesson.
Dear Ashley, Thank you very much for your feedback and message. I strongly agree with you about the usage of weapons. I would like to keep practice, following your suggestions. Best regards, Orange0103
Ms.Ashley Thank you for correcting my essay and suggesting alternative phrases. Your explanation was easy to understand, so l learned a lot. I would like you to correct my essay again in the future. Have a nice weekend!
Hello. Your explanation was very easy to understand and included many useful phrases, Thank you for your great support!
Thank you.
Hello! In Japan, it's an extreme heat now. I will die if my air conditioner is broken now... Your explanation was really precise and easy to understand. Thank you for your great advice!
Dear Ashley, Thank you very much for your feedback and advice on my task. I will have opportunities to introduce myself to foreign partners of my new company in the future, so your corrections would be helpful in the situation. As you mentioned, I also have had difficulties with bosses, colleagues, and work itself before, but it is good that my working situation is getting better gradually. I will work on the further tasks, following your advice. Best regards, Orange0103
Hi Ashley, Thank you for correcting my entry and for suggesting those additional expressions. I know female spiders eat their mates after they copulate. It's reasonable to get necessary nutrients in order to lay eggs, but I'm glad that I'm not a spider or a praying mantis myself—I don't want to eat my partner or don't want to be eaten! Many thanks, Kaori
Thank you for correcting my essay. Your detailed suggestions were very helpful, and I learned a lot from the alternative expressions you taught me.
Hello, Your explanation was really precise and having a point, so it was very easy to understand. I appreciate your great advice! Have a nice day!
Dear Ashley, thank you very much for the feedback. All of them were very helpful. In particular, it was interesting to know that you can say ''J&J has a tough road ahead'' but you should remove the indefinite article ''a'' if you are going to say ''J&J has tough work ahead''. These subtle differences can only be learned from a native English speaker, and I am glad IDIY is giving me this opportunity. I look forward to hearning from you again.
