It's first time to hear "FANBOYS", and I enjoyed this topic. Thank you as always!
Thank you for reading my short essay! Your modifications are clear for me and very helpful!
Dear Jen. Thanks for revising my essay. Your review was really helpful for my study. The second sentence review was especially good learning for me. The subject of the phrase "would move without using any energy" is car, but I did the mistake. So I need to be more careful of writing sentences. I hope you would correct my next essay again!! Regards, Keigo
Thank you for your kind advice! Your modification is what I wanted to tell you and very good training for me.
Dear teacher Jen, I read your reply. I understand it very much. I want to try something new !! New Zealand is not hot. I want to visit there in August someday! Thank you very much for your reply!!
Dear Jen, I read your reply. I understood by your kind explanation. Thank you !!
Hi Jen, Thank you for correcting this essay and suggesting the additional sentences. Fortunately, I enjoy writing in English, so it's easy for me to get into the habit of writing everyday! I hope I will be a better writer. Many thanks, Kaori
Thanks a lot for your advice. I got confident from your message.
