Hello, Lynn. How are you doing? It's nice to see you here again. Thank you for the amendment you made on my submission. I think you might have puzzled about the two sentences, "I'm also glad to hear that a physical training can accumulate a tolerance of self-control which is mentioned in the article. in my opinion, happiness makes people strong, while unhappiness makes people weak so as to easily bear evil ideas in mind. " I found they don't make sense after I sent them to you. I meant to say, " I'm also glad to learn that the study proved the idea that a physical training can accumulate a tolerance of self-control." Thank you, you made a beautiful text combining the two sentences. I like it. Best regard. Yoko
Dear Lynne Thank you for correcting my sentences.
Dear Lynne It’s been a while. I appreciate your corrections.
Thank you for your corrections and kind comments!
Thank you for your corrections and kind comments, Lynne. No internet all day? My kids might be crazy if it happens in my house. I’m glad to hear from you. Thank you again!
Thanks for your kind message. I'll keep to writing email. See you soon.
Thank you for your feedback. Tomoo
Hello, Lynne. It's nice to see you here again. Thank you for the amendments you made on the essay. Actually, I don't understand your correction on the fourth sentence. you wrote a past tense form "required" instead of "require." Bye for now Yoko
Dear Mx. Lynne I always appreciate your corrections.
Dear Mx.Lynne Thank you for correcting my sentences.
Thank you for your corrections and kind comments, Lynn!
Dear Mx. Lynne I appreciate your corrections.
Thank you so much for your kindly check . I will keep getting better. I look forward to having your lesson again.
Thank you for your corrections and kind comments!
Hi Mx.Lynn Thank you for correcting my sentences.
