Hello, ali. It's nice to see you here again. Thank you for the amendment you made on my essay. Also I 'm happy to read your nice messages, thank you. I'm afraid to say ..... I don't understand some corrections of yours. You wrote; I would go so far as to say hat the father I seems to be a self-centred man. "go so far as to ~" is a nice replacement, I like it. "hat" is just a error (that), but I don't agree with "I seems" It doesn't sound right to me. I like the 3rd sentence,"However, it is absolutely inconsiderate to give that name to his child." It makes perfect sense. it's beautiful!! Also you wrote for the 4th one; What will the son think of his name when he grows up to realize how unusual and strange his name will seem to others ? The last part "his name will seem to others ?"confused me. Why does it need "will", future form? You wrote for 6th "if he so desired" I like it. I will use this phrase someday. Please don't take it personally, I just want to tell you.... Kind regard Yoko
Thank you for correcting this text. And it is OK that your reply is late. It was straightforward to understand. Thank you very much!
Thank you for correcting my diary entry. Your suggestions are very helpful for me. I’m looking forward to having your lesson again.
Dear Ali, Thank you for your feedback. I'm very pleased to learn from your refinements. I hope to work with you again! Regards, m-yoshiro
Thank you for your courteous correction.
Thank you for your polite correction. I learned a lot.
Thank you for correcting my sentences.
Hello, Ali. How are you? Thank you for the corrections you made on my essay. I'm glad to read your nice comments. In the second sentence, you wrote "technically they would have to clear a quantity 7 million times as large to eliminate the current amounts." I checked a dictionary and understood why you added some words, but still I'm not sure some, I assume "they would have to clear..... " is a conditional, meaning "if they try to eliminate all, they would have to clear...." In the 3rd sentence, " this would take", I assume.... "during the time if the non-profit group practice their clean up work " If I tried to write both by myself, it would be too difficult to write correctly."Restore to..." in the last sentence, I think "restore" is a good choice, but I wonder "to" is needed? I enjoy reading your detailed amendments, they are very helpful and informative for my English study. Thank you. I hope to see you soon again. Best regards. Yoko
Thank you for your feedback and corrections. They helps me to improve my writings. Tomoo
Thank you so much for the advice you gave me.
Thank you very much!
Hello, teacher ali. It's nice to see you again. Thank you for the amendments you made on my essay, and your nice message makes me so happy. Anyway, It's wonderful. The sentences you wrote for me are beautiful! They sounds real living English. ( I hope you understand what I mean to say) I like them. The every single sentence and wording teach me a lot. I'm gonna read them many times to learn the native sounding and the natural flow. It's Christmas eve in Japan. Have a wonderful Christmas time. Hoping to see you soon again. Yoko
Hello, ali. How are you? Very sorry for the late reply, and thank you so much as always for the amendments you made on my essay and the nice comment. I like these expressions; "which have huge price tags" "unscrupulous people out there" I hope someday I will use them. I don't understand this phrase; "the temptations of an advertisement for a product does not lead us to make a wrong decision." I guess.... it might say "a right decision", and which is my original idea. Hoping to see you soon. Yoko
Hello, Ali How are you doing? On the first sentence, you gave me "we do not have all the answers." that's interesting ,and that is exactly what I meant to say. For the second sentence, you wrote me a beautiful one to replace. I like it. On the last one, you added "we are not immune to the power of nature." "immune to~" is new to me. and the word"power" make the line much easier to understand. Thank you for the corrections you made on my essay. hope see you soon. Yoko
Dear Ms. Ali, Thank you for correcting my English sentences. I learned from your corrections and suggestions for them. Best wishes, Lochness
