Hello,JuliaVivian, How are you? I'm glad to hear from you again. Thank you for the corrections you made on my essay. You are always helpful for my English study. See you next time, Yoko
Dear Julia Vivian, I appreciate your advice. Have a nice weekend. Best regards, Mashroom
Dear JuliaVivian, Thank you very much for your kind and encouraging message. I truly appreciate your thoughtful corrections and helpful suggestions. Your feedback is always clear and easy to understand, and it motivates me to keep improving my writing. I’m glad to hear that you enjoyed working on my submission. I also enjoy learning from your edits each time, and I find the regular practice through IDIY very valuable. I look forward to working with you again soon. Until then, please take care and have a wonderful day. Best regards, Transcendent
Thank you for your feedback. As always, your detailed explanations were easy to follow, and the alternative sentences you offered me were very useful!
Dear Julia Vivian, I appreciate your advice. Have a nice week. Best regards, Mashroom
Dear JuliaViivian sensei Thank you for correcting my English. I was surprised by your fast work! I’ll learn more. Best wishes Okapie
Dear Julia Vivian, Thank you very much for your thoughtful feedback and kind words. I truly appreciate the time and effort you put into reviewing my writing. Your suggestions and alternative expressions are very helpful, and I will make sure to keep them in mind for future writing. I am grateful for your support and look forward to working with you again. Wishing you a wonderful day! Best regards, Transcendent
Thank you for your correction! I was not so confident of my text that your message encouraged me. I will try to making e-mail exercise again.
Thank you for your feedback. As always, your explanations were easy to follow, and the alternative sentences you offered me were very useful!
I am very grateful for your fast correction. Thank you so much. I hope you have a nice day!
Thank you for your feedback. As always, your explanations were easy to follow, and the alternative sentences you offered me were very useful!
Hello, JulianVivian, Thank you for the amendments on my text. Your corrections all make sense. Especially, the second sentence, " I sometimes sell flower bulbs when have grown more than I need in my yard via the flea market app operated by this company, Mercari Inc" You replaced "which" with "when". It's very interesting. I didn't come up with this. Bye for now, and see you next time. Yoko
Dear Julia VIvian, I appreciate your advice! Have a nice weekend. Best regards, Mashroom
Hello, JulianVivian again. In the case of text message written in English I enjoy to see abbreviations. They are interesting as they are common words people use. But I don't like Japanese abbreviations. Of course, I wouldn't show my approval of the shorten form of words in my response, but..... That may be a sign of my aging. Thank you so much. See you next time. Yoko
Thank you for your feedback. As always, your explanations were easy to follow, and the alternative sentences you offered me were very useful!
