Dear Kim, Thank you for reviewing my sentences. I learned appropriate(formal, natural, clear) expressions. I check your comments, and will try to use these words. Best regards. cajaroa.
Dear Kim, Thank you for checking my grammars and explain in detail. I learned so much. Best regards. Cajaroa.
Dear Kim, Thank you for your proofreading. I learned how to use articles correctly. Thank you. Regards, Cajaroa.