Thank you very much for your corrections and suggestions. Your alternative sentences helped me a lot to make better sentences. I learned how to use 'so' in a sentence with and without comma. I learned new expressions such as "check on" and "don't get hurt" Also, thank you for your clarifying "because" and " since." It is difficult to use them, but I will try from now on. Thank you.
Thank you for correcting my essay. Your explanations were easy to understand. You also taught me a lot of alternative expressions. They were very useful! I recommend you “Death Note” series, if you want to try manga. This series was first published almost twenty years ago, but it is still popular among not only children, but also adults. The books are translated into English and you can find them on Amazon.
Thank you again for your pointing out my mistakes. This was an interesting assignment, and I wanted to write more. Your alternative expressions are very helpful. For example, I learned "be around", in place for "out of fashion." This expression is new to me. Thank you!
Dear Marisa, Thank you for your corrections and suggestion. I learned the meaning of "someone" as well as "anyone." I didn't know "plus" is used for the same meaning as "also." Thank you!
Dear Ms. Marisa, Thank you. As always your review is very helpful. Have a good weekend!
Dear Marisa, Yes, I also imagine being in a plastic bubble would be hot and uncomfortable. If it has a ventilation function, I may go there. Thank you so much for your corrections and suggestions. Your alternative expressions help me a lot. Especially it helps me when you show some specific cases and general cases on my first sentence. Thank you.
Thank you for your detailed correction. I didn't know there were many varieties of scones. In my sentences, I meant normal scones with chocolate chip. Perhaps I like the lemon blueberry ones in your repertoire. The former "I feel like I can accomplish great things" might matches my meaning. It is true that Baking macarons is great accomplishment, but I referred "great accomplishment" as "great accomplishment IN GENERAL".
Thank you again for your corrections and suggestions. Your corrections are clear and helpful. I didn't know the difference between "be good" and "be a good idea" as informal and formal cases. I will use "should" and "could" when I suggest and give opinion respectively. On your question about being farmer, I love taking care of flowers, but I could not be good at growing vegetables in good shape. I agree it is hard work.
Thank you so much for your correction and many alternative expressions. I've learned a lot. Since 'from' and 'by' have the same meaning "～Kara" in Japanese, I am very confused on these prepositions. Thank you.
Thank you very much for correction. Even though I explain to update my situation, my writing need your help. Autumn is the best season for me. Have a nice day!
Thank you for your detailed correction. In the beginning, Kei Komuro, whom Princess mako will marry, was terribly criticized because Komuro's mother had tremendous amount of debt. Perhaps, people thought that his mother wanted him to marry Princess Mako in order to pay off her debt. I think people shouldn't have some say in who she marries, but I also think her partner should have no negative rumor. But well, actually I couldn't care less about them.
Thank you for your message! "could you please inform me when these shoes will be in stock again?" is correct. I wanted to ask when these shoes will come to the shop again. Have a nice day!
Dear Marisa, Thank you for your message. Nice to see you again,too. I always admire you for your enthusiasm for teaching of English. I am sure that you are one of the best teachers here! Regards
Thank you so much for your detailed correction. I've learned a lot. I've learned the difference between "farming meats" and "farmed meats." I prefer "farming meats has affected the Earth" because the act of raising animals for meat gives bad effects to the Earth. Thank you.
Thank you very much!
