Thank you so much for your corrections and explanations! In this entry, I learned the natural word order. My family and I are fine! Best regards.
Hello, thank you for your advice. Your advice is very helpful. Next time, it would be appreciated more if you advised me why the grammatical correction is needed. For instance, why the change from "will" to "WOULD" is necessary in the sentence below. "First, our housing cost would double because our children WOULD still have to live in the current house and go to their school for several years."
Thank you for correcting! Unlike diary, it is very difficult to describe to person.
Dear Eden, Thank you for your great, helpful correction! The sentences you have suggested are so simple and direct that you can describe the sentences I had written with much less words/sentences. I think it is important to describe my thoughts with not difficult, complicated, long words but plain, short words. Therefore, your advice is very helpful and made me a great impression. I will looking forward to your teaching again soon!
Hello Mr. Eden, Thank you for your explanation!
Hi Eden-san, Thank you very much for your message. I hope you are doing fine. I appreciate your response to this matter. The alternative sentences with expressions you have offered are very useful for me. Best regards, Ikufumi Moriya
Mr. Eden Thank you for you correcting! Your simple English is to learn more for me.
Thank you for being worry. I'm super great fine!! But I'm still angry now for CEO...
Hi Eden-san, Thank you very much for your message. I appreciate your response to this matter. The alternative sentences with expressions you have offered are very useful for me. >It makes us want to leave NZ and come to Japan! In Japan, vaccinations will probably never be made compulsory. This is because it is desirable to make decisions on a case-by-case basis, rather than having a law uniformly prescribe something. For example, we can choose whether or not to be vaccinated, taking into account our own health conditions and risks. However, due to the lack of legal regulations, it is possible to go in the wrong direction. During the Second World War, without any regulations, many people were forced to participate in the war and lost their lives due to the sympathetic pressure of the whole society. Japan has both good and bad sides. I am glad you are my tutor. I look forward to working with you. Best regards, Ikufumi Moriya
I’ve really appreciated your sincere lecture. I felt that your revisions and suggestions are high-quality. I’m looking forward to having your lecture soon!
Thank you for your corrections. I am happy that you correct my sentence very politely. Especially, it is very helpful to me that "ok with" is very informal. I will be careful not to use this phrase in formal sentence. I will make sure to review what I learned today. I am looking forward to your next lesson. Thank you very much.
I apologize for the late reply. I’m grateful for your excellent suggestions and clear explanations. Thanks to your help, I have a deeper understanding of how to English vocabulary. I’m looking forward to taking your lesson again!
Thank you so much!
Thank you so much for your feedback! I always appreciate your comments.
Thank you for you correcting! I do my best for getting a raise lol. [What I learned this time] "mid-year": I knew for the first time. "evaluations on ~": It might be difficult to use "on" unless you're a native speaker, but I'll try. "put forth an effort": I'll remember it as a phrase.
