Dear CeeJay, Thank you for your corrections. The various corrections and rephrasing are beneficial. I look forward to your corrections again in the next edition! Best regards, Hiroyuki031
Dear CeeJay-san, Thank you for your thoughtful corrections! Your feedback about my tendency to become verbose in my eagerness to convey every point was very helpful. I will continue to practice writing to ensure that I can communicate all necessary information concisely. Thank you again for your comments. Best regards, Ton-chan
Dear CeeJay, Thank you for your corrections. The various corrections and rephrasing are beneficial. I look forward to your corrections again in the next edition! Best regards, Hiroyuki031
Dear CeeJay, Thank you for your corrections. The various corrections and rephrasing are beneficial. Specifically, what my sentenses are choppy and repetitive are noted, and such as "disability" instead of "people with disabilities" was helpful. I look forward to your corrections again in the next edition! Best regards, Hiroyuki031
Dear CeeJay, Thank you for your corrections. The various corrections and rephrasing are beneficial. I look forward to your corrections again in the next edition! Best regards, Hiroyuki031
Dear CeeJay, Thank you for your corrections. The various corrections and rephrasing are beneficial. I look forward to your corrections again in the next edition! Best regards, Hiroyuki0313
Dear CeeJay, Thank you for your corrections. The various corrections and rephrasing are beneficial. I look forward to your corrections again in the next edition! Best regards, Hiroyuki0313
Dear CeeJay-san, Thank you for your corrections! The mistake pointed out as a comma splice was something I hadn't noticed. It is interesting to know that some of the sentences I wrote were not grammatically incorrect but sounded unnatural to native speakers. I also found it interesting that you provided examples in which you altered the phrasing slightly to avoid sounding generic or formulaic. I look forward to reading your comments again. Best regards, Ton-chan
Dear CeeJay, Thank you for your corrections. The various corrections and rephrasing are beneficial. I look forward to your corrections again in the next edition! Best regards, Hiroyuki0313
Dear CeeJay, Thank you for your corrections. The various corrections and rephrasing are beneficial. I look forward to your corrections again in the next edition! Best regards, Hiroyuki0313
Dear CeeJay, Thank you for your corrections. The various corrections and rephrasing are beneficial. In particular, correcting "the digestive system rests, the blood clears the condition, and weight declines" to get "the digestive system a break, promotes healthier blood, and helps you lose weight" is very helpful. I look forward to your corrections again in the next edition! Best regards, Hiroyuki0313
Dear CeeJay, Thank you for your corrections. The various corrections and rephrasing are beneficial. I look forward to your corrections again in the next edition! Best regards, Hiroyuki0313
Dear CeeJay, Thank you for your corrections. The various corrections and rephrasing are beneficial. I look forward to your corrections again in the next edition! Best regards, Hiroyuki0313
Dear CeeJay, Thank you for your corrections. The various corrections and rephrasing are beneficial. I look forward to your corrections again in the next edition! Best regards, Hiroyuki0313
Dear CeeJay, Thank you for your corrections. The various corrections and rephrasing are beneficial. I look forward to your corrections again in the next edition! Best regards, Hiroyuki0313
