Hello Susannah, thank you for the correction. My English is getting better. Thank you!
Hello Susannah, Thank you for your correction and for some more examples. They give me ideas. Thank you!
Hi Susannah, Thank you for giving me your feedback and kind message. I'm feeling empowered by reading them. I'm pleased to learn the phrase "I lost track of the time" from your correction. I look forward to working with you soon. Best regards, m-yoshiro
Dear Susannah, Hi. Thank you for giving me your feedback. I learned a lot from your suggestions and explanations. I hope to work with you soon. Best regards, m-yoshiro
Thank you so much for your explanations! I will try to describe more details in my future diary entries. Best regards.
Thank you for your check. It was very easy to understand as usual. Regarding pay-for-performance plan, I’d like to say below. ——— Under the current salary system in Japan, each member’s role and responsibility are vague. It causes that diligent and vulnerable members tend to do overtime work like Dentsu’s case. In addition, working from home makes it difficult to grasp each member’s working situation. Therefore, we should define each member’s role and responsibility, and pay salary based on the performance about these role and responsibility.
Dear Susannah, It's good to see you too. Thank you for giving me your kind feedback. I always enjoy to read your explanations and suggestions. As you said, your alternatives might be challenge for me, but they were very helpful to study English! I look forward to working with you soon again. Best regards, m-yoshiro
Dear Susannah, Thank you for giving me your feedback and sharing about "Good Friday". I envy you! I hope you're also having a good day. I was pleased to read your suggestions and explanations. I would like to try to use your alternative sentences next time. I look forward to working with you soon. Best regards, m-yoshiro
Dear Susannah, Thank you for giving me your feedback. I learned a lot from your suggestions and explanations! I look forward to working with you soon. Have a nice weekend. Best wishes, m-yoshiro
Thank you for your correction!
Thank you so much for your corrections and explanations! According to the 3rd sentence, I learned the expression "to fit A around B." I will use it in the next chance. Fortunately, our daughter doesn't have any symptoms of COVID-19 at the moment. Best regards.
Dear Susannah, Thank you for giving me your feedback and concern for my state. I've read your changes and suggestions which have been helpful for me. I hope to work with you again soon. Best wish, m-yoshiro
Thank you so much for your corrections and explanations! According to the 2nd sentence, I learned the expression "to have something for breakfast." I will use it in my future diary entries. Best regards.
Thank you so much for your explanations! According to the 3rd sentence, I learned the expression "feel grizzly/grumpy." I will use them in the next chance. Best regards.
Thank you so much for your corrections and explanations! According to the 2nd sentence, I learned the verb "whimper." I will use it in the next chance. Best regards.
