Thank you very much!
Thank you for your review. I will be careful not to use "would" too much.
Thank you for your review. I’ll pay more attention to the tone.
I appreciate your correction of each sentence. I am glad to share my diary in English. It became to be my confidence. Thank you again. Have a nice day.
Thank you very much for your review. I appreciate your corrections!
Thank you for your feedback. Your explanations were easy to follow, and the alternative sentences you offered me were very useful!