

Dear BlueberryDragon, Thank you for your corrections. I look forward to your corrections again in the next edition! Best regards, Hiroyuki031

Dear BlueberryDragon, Thank you for your corrections. I look forward to your corrections again in the next edition! Best regards, Hiroyuki031

Dear BlueberryDragon, Thank you for your corrections. I look forward to your corrections again in the next edition! Best regards, Hiroyuki031

Dear BlueberryDragon, Thank you for your corrections. I look forward to your corrections again in the next edition! Best regards, Hiroyuki031

Dear BlueberryDragon, Thank you for your corrections. I look forward to your corrections again in the next edition! Best regards, Hiroyuki031

Dear BlueberryDragon-san, Thank you so much for the feedback! All of the alternative phrasings you suggested were helpful. In particular, I didn’t know the English equivalent of “being close in age,” so that was especially useful. I look forward to reading your comments again. Best regards, Ton-chan

Dear BlueberryDragon-san, Thank you for the feedback! I’ve never written an email in English as if I were writing to my family before, so it was fun. Thanks to your corrections, it turned out to be a very polite and heartfelt message for my family. I look forward to reading your comments again. Best regards, Ton-chan

Dear BlueberryDragon, Thank you for your corrections. I look forward to your corrections again in the next edition! Best regards, Hiroyuki031

Dear BlueberryDragon, Thank you for your corrections. I look forward to your corrections again in the next edition! Best regards, Hiroyuki031

Dear BlueberryDragon-san, Thank you for reviewing my draft. I’ve never written a condolence email before and am not really sure what kind of phrasing is appropriate, so your examples of alternative wording were very helpful. These heartfelt phrases for encouraging others will likely come in handy even beyond condolence emails. I look forward to reading your comments again. Best regards, Ton-chan

Thank you for your feedback.

Dear BlueberryDragon, Thank you for your corrections. I look forward to your corrections again in the next edition! Best regards, Hiroyuki031

Dear BlueberryDragon, Thank you for your corrections. I look forward to your corrections again in the next edition! Best regards, Hiroyuki031

Dear BlueberryDragon, Thank you for your corrections. I look forward to your corrections again in the next edition! Best regards, Hiroyuki031

Dear BlueberryDragon, Thank you for your corrections. I look forward to your corrections again in the next edition! Best regards, Hiroyuki031