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Dear Jane2, Thank you very much for your thoughtful feedback and for taking the time to read my Free Composition. I’m truly glad that my observation about the value of knowledge resonated with you—it means a lot to me to know you could relate. Regarding the phrase “hypnotize people,” I understand now that it may have been unclear or misleading. After giving it further thought and research, I feel that “indoctrinate” better conveys the meaning I intended. I will make sure to use this expression—or another clearer alternative—in my future compositions. I sincerely appreciate your guidance and encouragement, and I look forward to sharing my next piece with you. Thank you again for your continued support at IDIY. Best regards, Transcendent
I appreciate your advice!
Thank you for your support!
I am grateful for your advice.
Dear Jane2 Thank you for correcting and advising my sentences. I think doing English composition will improve my English skills and expand my vocabulary. Than you for guidance in the future. Best regards.
Thank you for your advice!
Thank you for your feedback! I keep studing harder.
Dear Jane2 Thank you for correcting and advising my sentences. Home appliances are essential to our lives. The evolution of home appliances is dizzying. Thank you for guidance in the future. Best regards.
Dear Jane2 Thank you for correcting my sentences. I would like to improve my English skills by practicing differently than usual. I will try to Free Composition exercise for a while. Thank you for guidance in the future. Best regards.
Dear Jane2, Thank you very much for your thoughtful feedback on my Free Composition exercise. I really appreciate the corrections and suggestions you provided, as they are always helpful for improving my writing. I’m also glad to hear that my reasons came across clearly. It is always a pleasure to work with you, and I look forward to our next session. I am grateful that my comments on your feedback have been encouraging to you as well. Spring must be beautiful there—I can imagine how uplifting it is to see the first blossoms and flowers starting to appear. Here too, I look forward to the season changing soon. Best regards, Transcendent
Dear Jane2 Thank you for correcting my sentences. I hope young people will have a lot of children but that may be difficult in Japan. Thank you for your guidance in the future. Best regards.
Dear Jane2 Thank you for correcting my sentences. It’s difficult to think about a topic to be given me. I keep practicing to write English from now on. Thank you for guidance in the future. Best regards.
Thank you for your feedback. Your suggestions made my sentences much easier to understand.
