Thank you for the corrections and the answer to my question! The expression you suggested as an alternative, 'Would this weirdly contrived parallel world, where technology is pushed to its extreme, still be enjoyable?', was a way of phrasing I hadn't thought of myself, and it was very educational for me. Actually, I used the expression 'ball trajectories' without being sure if it was correct in English, but it seems it wasn't wrong, so I'm relieved. To be precise, I was worried whether what came to your mind when reading the word 'ball trajectories' was the same as what came to my mind. Thank you very much again!
Thank you so much for the thoughtful and kind corrections! Reading your explanations in English is also very helpful for learning English expressions. I've just learned the word "unpick." It might be a common expression for native speakers, but I find the phrase "unpick the truth" to be very beautiful. Please proofread my essay again!
Dear Susannah Thank you for your revising my English. I am learning much from your good and constructive comments. You have pointed out my mistakes and misunderstanding in English writing, but also, my possibility even though the degree might be small. The alternative ways shown by you are very helpful for me. I think that this is leading me to continue submitting my writings. Thank you again and I hope that the next chance of my asking you to revise my English would come soon. Sincerely yours, Tangerine57625
Dear Susannah Thank you for your revising my English. I often forget the comma after the phrase "Sincerely yours". I hope that the next chance of my asking you to revise my English will come soon again and you have a nice weekend. Sincerely yours, Tangerine57625
Hello teacher Susannah, Thank you for your advice, suggestion and corrections. I will go them over. See you next time. Best regards, Hama-chan
Thank you
Dear Susannah, Hi, good to see you again. I appreciate your help and I glad to learn the right constructions of sentences. I'm sorry for the weather in the UK. For years, climate change might be processing. It's also hot and even humid these weeks because it's a rainy season in Japan. I hope you have a good rest of the day. Best regards, m-yoshiro
Dear Susannah, I appreciate your advice! Have a lovely weekend. Mashroom
Thank you so much for the useful suggestions!
Thank you so much for the informative advice! I learned a lot about your natural sentences!
Dear Susannah, Hi, long time no see. Good to see you again too. I've been doing well at work and life. How about you? Thank you for working for my entry. I'll check the usage of the word "if" after this message. I hope you have a good rest of today and see you again soon. Best regards, m-yoshiro
I really appreciate you have corrected my essay thoroughly. I will try to use your advice and some alternatives you have offered me. Your positive words were truly encouraging for me! I also hope we will work together again soon.
Dear Sussanah, Hello and it's nice to see you again too. Thank you for your help. Yes, I think walking is like a form of mindfulness too! I appreciate that you gave me alternatives. I look forward to working with you again soon. Best regards, m-yoshiro
Thank you as always for getting back to me so quickly. Articles are very confusing for people learning English. The system of lifetime employment is one of the characteristics of Japanese companies. However, it is said that the system will become less common due to Japan's stagnant economy.
Thank you for your prompt response. I should be more careful about my writing! Your kind and supportive style really helps me.
