Thank you for the corrections.
Dear Teacher Florianna, Sorry for late reply. It has been passed several month since you correcting my diary. I realy thank to you for correcting my diary and let better them. I am quite busy now so I haven't been able to do anything about English. I hope I could come back here soon. :) Mayuka
Thank you for editing my esssay. I really enjoyed reading your sincere coment in my essay. I hope you will come to Japan and see beautiful places in the future. If you will come, I will be happy to guide you in my place : Kanazawa or Osaka where I was born and raised.
I heard "Kingdom Hot Spring" for the first time! That zoo is a bit far from Nagasaki, but I want to go there someday. Thank you for your information!
Hello florianna. Thank you so much for your great correction and warm comments. Just days ago, I had a small success again in my tax training workshop as a instructor. I think this one is bigger than old one. When I heard my favorite song that was sang karaoke during a convivial party after the seminar, I remember you and your comments. There were written there as follows. There's always so much one can do with writing, in one's own language or another language and it can be a very interesting and rewarding journey. I feel my journey about writing has that's good influence on my job. I thank you. I'm very happy to read your comments -which have a warm feelings and vaguely feel grace- and to know that you too in Edinburgh know me here in Tokyo through my writing. Bye for now, box.
”My neighbour Totoro” never scary! The supernatural beeings,who enter in the movie, is very cute. I recommend your niece!
Hi, florianna. Thank you for your amazing coaching. I accepted comforting words and very beautiful key words to learn writing gratefully again. I will do my best bring your words. P.S. I held my tax seminar as a instructor and there were many asking so I was late the train.
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Thank you for your correction and comment. The name of the long bridge is “the Megami Bridge”, Megami means goddess. I searched the picture of the Queensferry Crossing, and they are very alike!
Thank you so mich! I was really surprised as your corrections and suggestions were so detailed. It was my first time to use IDIY, though, now I feel I want to send some pieces again as I could learn a lot from your corrections. I prefer learning British English, so I'll send my writings to you again.
Hello, Ms.florianna! I'm glad to hear from you, and I didn't worry about the return of my answer. Thank you for your kind comments and corrections! Hope you have a lovely weekend. ~charcoal
Thank you for your impression on my essay. I am always happy to read it. I did not think the teacher used the Suzuki method. She would have scolded me if she noticed I played the recorder crazily. This music class was not fun for me at all as I always felt thrilled and was careful not to let the teacher notice me playing the recorder crazily.
Thank you very much for your warm comment. As you said, I really enjoyed the live show like " a girl" with my daughters. I think it is important for parents to enjoy something with their children. Thank you.
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Thank you for checking my essay. I'm happy that you remember me after such a long blank period. Today is the first day for my daughter to attend the English class. Yes, everything is done in English through the whole lesson. Today was the trial for her, so I was able to see how the class was at the last 30 minutes. Surprisingly, every child spoke English naturally during the class. Although it looked like she was overwhelmed in such a situation, on the way home, she said she wanted to attend the class next time. I hope this English class will work out well for her in the long run. Oh, and I made a mistake about her age. Now she is 3 years old and turn 4 on November. Your comments always encourage me. Thank you.