Dear NicolaJH sensei, Thank you very much for correcting my composition! I learned how to make it natural. Have a good weekend ! Best wishes, Hitomi
Teacher, NicolaJH It was a pleasure working with you. I carefully read your advice! I will review your advice and hone my English skills more. Thank you! Have a great day too! Best,
I agree with the ban of feeding pigeons. I do love animals, but I don't like that the public place becoming dirty. Public places should be cleaned by government forces since people are apt to do what they want, and they usually don't care about cleanliness. Pigeons' poop and food increases the presence of other harmful animals which can contribute towards the spread of infectious diseases. Furthermore feeding animals without any responsibility can destroy the environment and the eco system in the long run. Excessive pigeons make a lot of noise and eat up insects. Punishment is the one way but also government should launch a teaching program for citizens to keep the city clean. 添削結果 I agree with the ban on feeding pigeons. I do love animals, but I don't like public places becoming dirty. Public places should be cleaned by government forces since people are apt to do what they want, and they usually don't care about cleanliness. Pigeons' poop and food increases the presence of other harmful animals which can contribute towards the spread of infectious diseases. Furthermore feeding animals without any responsibility can destroy the environment and the eco system in the long run. Excessive pigeons make a lot of noise and eat up insects. Punishment is one way but also the government should launch a teaching program for citizens to keep the city clean.
Thank you for your feedback. I appreciate your alternative expressions. I learned much more new things. Many thanks, Tomoyo
Thank you for reviewing my composition. Yamato was my special black cat. We spent with him for 6 years. I wrote about him again.
Dear NicolaJH sensei, Thank you very much for your corrections. It's always nice to learn from you. I really appreciate your kind encouragement. Best regards, Hitomi
Your feedback was really helpful. Thank you so much! I hope to submit my writing to you again.
Dear NicolaJH-san Thanks for your quick response. I am still thinking about what is natural English. I have not been taught it in my classroom. Nobody told me. It's one of habitation? Best regrds, cloud141
Thank you for checking my sentences! I really appreciate it!
Dear Nicola JH sensei, Thank you for correcting my writing always. I appreciate your polite comments. I hope that you will try Nabe someday. For me, I eat the same Nabe everyday because my pot is large! I would like to cook New Zealand style soup someday, too! Best wishes, Hitomi
Dear NicolaJH, Thank you very much for correcting my writing. I've also appreciated the answer to my question about 〝companies″ from my last writing. I've clearly understood how to use "company" ! Have a nice evening. Sincerely, nmkh
Thank you for your response. Please check my sentences in the near future.
Dear Ms NicolaJH, Thank you very much for correcting my writing and the kind comments. I have been encouraged to keep studying! I've made it a rule to submit one piece of writing every day! Have a nice day! nmkh
Dear NicolaJH, Thank you very much for your correction and kind message! I studied English for three month at a language school in Christchurch over ten years ago. Your message reminded me those days. Regarding stealing salmon, that was a very thrilling experience because the place where I was took to was very close to a salmon hatchary. They work for 24 hours a day during the salmon season; if you make some noise, you will be found and reported to the police. It was a scary activity for a non-thrill seeker. Again, I really appreciate your help as always. Best regards, Ayako Nara
Dear Ms NicolaJH, I am so impressed by how helpful your feedback is!! I really appreciate your thoughtful and great corrections and explanations! Thank you very much again. Have a nice rest of the weekend!
