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Hello Ali, How are you? It's nice to hear from you. Thank you for the amendments you made on my essay. With your corrections sentences make perfect sense, I like them. I hope to see you soon again. Bye for now. Yoko
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Dear ali, Thank you for your correction. Your comments are helpful to me. Regards, JUNn
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Thank you for your feedback and suggestions for correcting sentences. I found them very useful!
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Hello, Ali. How are you doing? It's nice to see you here again. Thank you for the amendments you made on my essay. All of them make perfect sense to me. You changed the order of wordings in the third sentence. I found the change sounded much better. Your nice comments and advice make me so happy, thank you. You gave me a lot of encouragements. On top of that, I'm happy to know that seemingly the sentences I wrote make sense to you. By for now, hoping to see you soon again. Yoko
Hello, ali. How are you? Thank you for the corrections you made on my essay. Your nice comments make me so happy, too, thank you. I like your texts. All make perfect sense to me. You gave me interesting choices of words. I misunderstood the meaning of a word "revise" You replaced it with "review", that's beautiful! Recently, I have been watching an American drama, The last ship, on Amazon prime. The drama starts with a pandemic situation. Highly recommended. I hope to see you soon again. Bye for now. Yoko
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Dear teacher Ali, Thank you for reading and correcting my text again. It was helpful, and I learned a lot. Thanks a lot!
Hello, ali. It's nice to see you here again. Thank you for the amendment you made on my essay. Also I 'm happy to read your nice messages, thank you. I'm afraid to say ..... I don't understand some corrections of yours. You wrote; I would go so far as to say hat the father I seems to be a self-centred man. "go so far as to ~" is a nice replacement, I like it. "hat" is just a error (that), but I don't agree with "I seems" It doesn't sound right to me. I like the 3rd sentence,"However, it is absolutely inconsiderate to give that name to his child." It makes perfect sense. it's beautiful!! Also you wrote for the 4th one; What will the son think of his name when he grows up to realize how unusual and strange his name will seem to others ? The last part "his name will seem to others ?"confused me. Why does it need "will", future form? You wrote for 6th "if he so desired" I like it. I will use this phrase someday. Please don't take it personally, I just want to tell you.... Kind regard Yoko
