Dear ali, how are you? I totally agree with your amendments. They are wonderful, notably I'm happy to learn a new word 'idolize" Yes, my mother was my superhero when I was a child. About the last sentence, 'Just, I have matured and developed my own values and ways of thinking but I have been influenced by my mother's guidance and we are individuals bound by strong family ties.' is beautiful. You described what I wanted to say but skipped to write by the first part 'I have matured and developed my own values and ways of thinking' You added this clause to conclude the writing perfectly, thank you. However, I'm not sure,,, but I think that the latter half of the last one might be a bit different from I meant to say. I tried to finish the writing explaining the reason why I have different ideas. That is, I married and now I am a member of the different family which has different values and ways of thinking. I have been influenced by my husband and his families stronger than my mother since I got married. Anyway, the sentence that you replaced with my last one is absolutely meaningful to attach to the essay. I really like it. Thank you so much. Sorry for the delay of my feedback. I went to see my mom at her elderly care home and stayed with her for 2 days, but now she doesn't remember my visit. Take care and see you next time. Yoko
Hello, ali, How are you? Thank you, I like your corrections. I enjoyed reading them. Sometimes, my writing came back only with some minor alternations. That's good. I thought the submission was just OK to understand, and I felt happy. However, you make me much happier. You used many interesting words and expressions which are, I know, very helpful for my English study. what's more, your corrections suggest you have understood what I tried to say. Take care and see you next time. Yoko
Dear ali, Thank you for your corrections! Sorry for the late replay! Best regards, Midori
Dear ali, Thank you very much for your corrections! Sorry for the late replay! Best regards, Midori
Dear ali, Thank you for your helpful corrections. I'll do my best again! Best regards, Midori
Dear ali, Thank you for your helpful corrections and comment! Best regards, Midori
Dear ali, Thank you for your corrections! It's great to spend the weekend with your grandchildren! My parents are also looking forward to seeing my daughter, Anna. Have a great day! Regards, Midori
Dear ali, Thank you for your helpful corrections! Best regards, Midiori
Dear ali, Thank you for your helpful corrections! I'll do my best again! Thank you. Best regards, Midori
Dear ali, Thank you very much. I'll keep writing! Best regards, Midori
Dear Ali, Thank you for your helpful advice. I'll try my best next time ! Best regards, Midori
Thank you so much for correcting my writing. I really appreciate your advice. I value the help you've given me.
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