Thank you for your feedback and corrections. Tips you gave me are also very useful to know how I can improve my writing. Tomoo
Hello, Moss I have heard the quotation somewhere, and I like it. but I didn't know exactly, then, I found it is from Bill Gates. Thank you for introducing new expressions to me. result in may be able to afford internet availability a supplement a stimulus learn to study alone. Especially, I like these two sentences. Beautiful! They are exactly what I tried to say. Students may also look elsewhere for tutor support, besides their school teachers. This current situation is a good opportunity for students to gain the satisfaction of developing their own personal learning strategies. Stay safe and healthy. thank you Yoko
Hello, Mr.Moss This time, I wrote in a casual way, like when I talk to my friend. You sensed my intention and corrected to be better. There are such a big difference between British English and American English, that is interesting. "pyjamas" is new to me and also to Google. It's funny that Google Chrome doesn't recognize it and put a red dots line underneath because it is an American. presentable attire I'd best get on and..... I should get on and memorize them for use next time. Thank you so much. I wish you stay safe and have a good year. Yoko
Thank you, Mr Moss. There are many many new words and new expressions for me in your sentences. I checked them on the web dictionary, and I will use them. The onset of .... arrest the spread of infection is of paramount importance financial accounts be balanced I like them. I know "paramount" as a movie company. Yoko
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Hi tutor Moss, I'm sorry it took so long to get back to you. I really appreciate your kind instruction. There are some words and expression I have never used, like word "facilitate" , " most of which", " telltale". I get to understand the work you corrected tell more dramatic. I look forward to work with you again.
Dear Mr. Moss I REALLY appreciate your rapid and helpful feedbacks. I’ve learned a lot from your feedbacks. I look forward to your messages too. Thanks so much. Best regards Tetsu262
Dear Mr. Miss. Thanks so much for your kind feedback. You’ve been so helpful for me. Best regards Tetsu262
You understood what I meant to say and wrote me beautiful sentences. They sound very very ENGLISH! Thank you. Although they are thoroughly changed into different phrases, I'm happy to see that you put "well done" onto them. Yes! I like the phrase "nearest and dearest", I remember it and will use it someday in my English. Thank you so much.
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Thank you for your feedback. And, I found your corrections with useful tips are very helpful to construct this kind of formal and natural sentences! Tomoo
Beautiful! Your sentences are astonishing. I'm so happy that you understand what I meant to say in my essay and rewrite them with a perfect flow of English. Actually, I spent more than an hour to finish this assignment, and it worth to do. but, I guess how hard it is to rewrite the phrases I wrote. Thank you for the rephrasing. I always so much enjoy your sentences. I appreciate it. Bye for now Yoko
Dear Mr Moss, Thank you very much, as always, for your helpful feedback!! I definitely liked idioms and expressions that you taught me. Those are very interesting. I really appreciate your kind explanations. English and Japanese are very different; yes, we don't have countable and uncountable nouns. However, your explanation makes me understand the way to think and express in English. That is very interesting.
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