Thank you for correcting my short essay! Kind regards,
Thank you so much for your corrections and explanations! According to the 3rd sentence, I learned the words "mucus", "snot" and "boogers." I will use them in the next chance. Best regards.
Thank you so much for your corrections and explanations! According to the 3rd sentence, I learned that I should have used the words "too" or "also" with "not only ... but." I will use it properly in my future diary entries. Best regards.
Dear Elizabeth_B Thank you for check and correct my sentences! I look forward to submitting my essay to you. Kind regards,
Thank you so much for your corrections and explanations! According to the 2nd sentence, I learned the difference between "in" and "at." I will use each of them properly in my future diary entries. Best regards.
I understood the importance of clarifying the sentence. Then, if I want to implement it, I have to limit clauses in a sentence. Also, the explanation of the use of "only once" is very helpful. Thank you!.
Thank you so much for your corrections and explanations! According to the 2nd sentence, I learned the difference between "customer" and "client." Considering my job, it was better to use the word "clients" in this diary entry. Best regards.
Thank you so much for your correction and explanations! According to the 1st sentence, I learned that "Papa" should be capitalized when it is used instead of a name or as a part of a title. I will use it correctly in my future diary entries. Best regards.
Thank you for giving me a lot of feedback. I will follow your advice in my next writing! Have a great weekend. Kind regards,
Thank you so much for your corrections and explanations! According to the 1st sentence, I learned that it is better to use "Next Thursday" or "On Thursday." Additionally, I learned the difference between "electrical" and "electric." I will use each of them correctly. According to the 2nd sentence, I learned that the noun "Internet" is capitalized but the adjective "internet" is not capitalized. Best regards.
Thank you for giving me a lot of feedback! I will keep continuous writing practice to build my proficiency. Kind regards,
Thank you for checking my writing!
Thank you so much for your corrections and explanations! According to the 2nd sentence, I learned the expression "a typhoon was coming to my area." I will use it in the next chance. Best regards.
Hello, Ms. Elizabeth, Your explanation was very easy to understand and helpful for me. I appreciate your great advice!
Thank you so much for your corrections and explanations! According to the 2nd sentence, I learned that I should put a plural form after the verb "switch." I will separate a sentence into two ones when there are many clauses in it. Best regards.