Dear Sylvia, Thank you for your helpful advise! I will study how to use linking words, and also study about natural phrases. I look forward to submit my works!
Thank you so much for your corrections and explanations! According to the 3rd sentence, I learned the meanings of the phrases "after that" and "do not work." I will use them properly in the future diary entries. Best regards.
Thank you so much for your corrections and explanations! According to the 2nd sentence, I learned the new phrases "lap" and "grab hold of things." I will use them in the next chance. According to the 3rd sentence, I learned the difference between "to restart" and "to start again." I will use "to start again" in my diary entries. A few days ago, the rainy season has started in Japan, so the weather has not been good. I hope the rainy season will end soon! Best regards.
Dear Sylvia, Thank you very much for your really helpful feedback as always! I learned a lot of ideas about how to make my writing more natural, especially your suggestions of discourse markers were so helpful. They are very context-dependent, and it's very difficult for me to find one that is suitable. Tres bon weekend, et prends soin de toi :)
Thank you for correcting my essay! Your comments were very helpful! Particularly, I realized how important it is to learn the way English words are combined.
Thank you so much for your corrections and explanations! According to the 2nd sentence, I learned that there was no need to put the article "a" before "less appetite." According to your message, I learned the phrase "on the mend." I will use it in the future diary entries! Now, she has been almost completely recovered :) Best regards.
Thank you so much for your corrections and explanations! According to the 2nd sentence, I learned the expression "a bit of a fever." I will use it in the next chance. I will use more modifying words and introductory phrases to make the meaning of my sentences clearer. By the way, I feel better now because I took enough rest on weekends. Best regards.
Thank you for your detailed explanation. I am delighted in learning new grammar thing. Look forward to contacting you again. Have a good day.
Thank you for your correction and kind advice. It is helpful for me. And I enjoy reading your message. Thank you again.
Thank you so much for your corrections and explanations! According to the 2nd sentence, I learned that the preposition "at" is needed when talking about the time such as "lunch time" and "7 o'clock." I will use the preposition correctly. According to the 3rd sentence, I learned that the word "only" implies a negative meaning. I will use it properly in the future diary entries. To work from home is comfortable because I can control time easily! Best regards.
Thank you very much for your correction and valuable advice. I will try to use introductory phrases from now on!
Thank you for your corrections and explanations! I'll review my sentences a lot.
Dear Ms Sylvia, Thank you very much for your really helpful feedback! Your corrections and suggestions are very detailed and practical, and so I feel I am able to use the new tips that you taught me in my future writing and at work tomorrow. I hope that the lovely spring weather in both our countries will last and heal our tiredness nicely. A bientot!
Thank you so much for your corrections and explanations! According to the 3red sentence, I learned the difference between "was/were able to" and "could." I will choose one of them carefully in my future diary entries. My daughter likes the swings besides the slides as you did :) Best regards.
Thank you very much.
