I sincerely thank you for your correcting my sentences. I understood your correction and expression well ,and it encourages me to study English more. Thank you!
Dear Sylvia, Thank you very much for your feedback and message. Your advice is very helpful for me to understand the more natural way to express my thoughts. I would like to keep practice. I live in Tokyo but it is very hot. Yesterday, the Tokyo Paralympics started. I had a few summer holidays but I could not go out because of the pandemic and continuous heavy rains. Therefore, I enjoyed the games of the Tokyo Olympics on TV. Have a good day! Best regards, Orange0103
Thank you so much for your corrections and explanations! According to the 1st sentence, I learned that we use the phrase "to pick someone up from somewhere." I will use it correctly in my future diary entries. Best regards.
Thank you very much for your detailed explanation! As you suggested me, I’ll try to use “really”, “because” and “I think” effectively and naturally next time. I’m looking forward to taking your lesson again!
Dear Sylvia, Thank you very much for your really helpful and thoughtful feedback as always! I learned many new expressions and natural ways of saying, especially I think I understand the difference between "find" and "feel" for the first time. I will continue trying to use them and check if my understanding is correct ;) A bientot!
Hello! Thank you for your great advice!
Thank you for the corrections with clear explanations. In the writing, I wanted to say that we cannot compare the two countries. Because Japan and Ireland have different working environment, so the premises are not the same. Apologies for the confusion.
Thank you for your valuable advice!
Hello! Thank you for your great support!
Thank you so much for your polite correction guidance.
Dear Sylvia, Thank you very much for your really helpful feedback as always! I understood very well how I could have expressed better and more naturally. Having read your detailed corrections and explanations, I learned many important techniques to write efficiently. I noted them all and I will use them in my future writing! I have had my jab. My arm was so painful for two days and I was a little tired too, but I am feeling great now. I hope that my second will be fine. Tres bon journee!
Thank you very much for your corrections and answer to my questions. Your explanations are helpful and easy to understand. I learned a lot. One of them is “ in contrast”. Thank you again.
Dear Sylvia, Thank you for your helpful advise! I will study how to use linking words, and also study about natural phrases. I look forward to submit my works!
Thank you so much for your corrections and explanations! According to the 3rd sentence, I learned the meanings of the phrases "after that" and "do not work." I will use them properly in the future diary entries. Best regards.
Thank you so much for your corrections and explanations! According to the 2nd sentence, I learned the new phrases "lap" and "grab hold of things." I will use them in the next chance. According to the 3rd sentence, I learned the difference between "to restart" and "to start again." I will use "to start again" in my diary entries. A few days ago, the rainy season has started in Japan, so the weather has not been good. I hope the rainy season will end soon! Best regards.
