Thanks for editing my essay. I am really glad you described your impression about my essay. I really appreciate it. Because you described your impression, I could understand you understood my essay and that I cold tell you what I wanted to communicate.
Thank yuu very much for your kind advice and correction. I learned a lot from your comment. I am very happy to know how I should change to make my English more natural. Your adivice is very helpful for me to notice how to choose words or how to express what I really want to say. It is hard for me to express what I really want to say with correct gramatical structure. I really hope I can improve my expression in English and can express in a more natural way. Please support me . I really appreciate your kind support.
Thank you for your corrections. I learned a lot! See you! Tommy,
Dear Ms.Florianna! Thank you for reading my work and giving me a warm message. You are always very warm and kind. As you pointed, I'd like to do everything positively. When I feel distressed, I encourage myself with this phrase. In other words, I "push" myself by thinking of "Today is the youngest day..." I always appreciate your support, Ms.Florianna. Thanks a million and have a nice day!
Dear Ms.Florianna! Thank you for revising my writing. You give always me very warm and kind message. Thank you for wishing for me. I hope I could go abroad to study someday. Your suggestion is definitely helpful. I've learned from your comment that it's better to say " acquire information" than to say just "get information". I appreciate your support, Ms.Ms.Florianna. Thanks again and see you soon.
Dear Ms.Florianna. Thank you for your comment. I totally agree with you. As you say so, smoking is so harmful that it should be banned. When I smell smoke from anyone smoking around me, I 'd like to get away to anywhere with clean air. I also appreciate your additional comment. I'm also shocked whenever I see young people and women smoke, especially mothers and fathers with small children. Take care, Ms.Florianna! Happy Valentine's day!
Dear Ms. florianna You showed me your rich selections of adjectives. I'd like use a variety of vocabulary that not only describes vividly but also emphasizes how I feel or what something is like. Although It's difficult for me, I'd like to improve one by one. In addition, you introduced some fruits that I haven't tried yet. I'm not familiar with medjool dates. I wish I tried them if I find in a fruit shop. Thank you always, Ms.florianna. Take care and see you again.
I am grateful for florianna teacher's corrections. Her correction was very thoughtful and was written in detail. Thanks a lot!!
Dear Ms. Florianna! It's nice of you to tell me your experience. What you told me is very helpful and reading your comment makes me have more desire to go abroad. Italy, France, Spain and Thailand , all sound great! I hope you can travel with your daughter. Thank you so much for taking the time to check my sentences. I’m glad to receive your feedback in all sentences.Your comments were so valuable for me. I am happy if we can have another session soon. Take care, Ms. Florianna!
Dear Ms.Florianna Thank you for your additional comment. Are there still any problems on your Internet access? I think less Internet access irritates users but it's no problem at all for me to wait to your reply. By the way, words order in sentences are difficult for me such as "most Japanese people today can speak English". Besides it, there are differences between similêr words for example "one" and "thing". I have to keep studying. I'd like to have your encourage through IDIY. Thank you, Ms.Florianna!
Dear Ms.Florianna! Thank you for correcting my sentences. I think how to use perfect tense is difficult for me, such as "I want to know exactly how much money I've spent". It is also difficult how to use a verb "get" , for example, "And, if I read it I sometimes get lucky!" "I sometimes get lucky!" is a simple sentence but it's more difficult than it is expected. Thanks anyway and I have to keep writing to improve my English, Ms.Florianna. Have a nice weekend, Ms.Florianna.
Thank you for your reviewing. I leant a lot. Also, the detailed explanation was beneficial. See you. Tommy,
Thank you very much for checking my English sentences. I am very happy that you read my English very carefully and profoundly.
Dear Florianna Thank you for collecting my writing.For non-native like me , writing as native does might be a long way to go.However, writing every day must be a good thing for stepping forward.Your collection and comment are so much helpful for me. I appreciate your support. Aomihime
Thank you so much for correcting my sentences in detail! Your explanations are very useful for me. I want to use "As a result," next time again.