Thank you for your correcting my sentence and pointing it out. I always bother where I should place the word 'even'. I will learn that from your comments.
Thank you very much Flick! It was really helpfl for me. I contenue study English. Pan
Thank you!!
Thank you for your easy-to-understand comment. I would like to bursh up my sentence by reading your comment. Sorry for the confusion the expression 'POSITION ABOVE LEADER'. I used the word 'leader' in the meaning like 'team leader'. I imagined that a person such as the manager and the senior manager was in the position above the team leader. So I should have written 'the team leader' instead of 'the leader'...
Hello.I'm fine.thank you. In fact,I was very worried because I failed the Hokkaido University in Japan last year. However,I'm relieved to hear that. I want to pass this year. Thank you so much!!
Thank you very much for your advice.
Thank you for your corrections and explanations. I learned that 'news' and 'behaviors' are both collective nouns and treated as a singular one. I also learned some new expressions such as 'on the rise.' I sincerely appreciate your help. I am more grateful if you suggest more alternative expressions next time I write a composition, since I would like to expand my vocabulary more.
Dear Flick-san, Thank you for your polite teaching. I forgot previous your correcting and I must care about avoiding use of few contracted form. And I could understand the meaning of the "beautiful mind" for the first time. May the magic and the wonder of the holiday season stay with you throughout the coming year! Sincerely mica
Teacher Flick, Thank you so much for your detailed explanation. I am looking forward to taking your lesson again.
Dear Flick-san, I am glad to be tought from you. Your correcting for my sentences, especially 2nd, 4th and 7th sentences, these were very helpful. Thanks and Regards, mica
Dear Flick, Thanks for your suggestions. I could understand the way to use the "can", which is used for a fact! Thanks again! Best regards, kazu10sumi
Good morning, Thank you for your correction and after-note. I think IDIY dividing upload rule is a sticky problem. I have never learn that many plots were written in present tense until I read Avatar plot on wikipedia, so I wanted to use it. Wiki plot used "Earth" and I followed it, but a japanese teacher corrected "the earth". I was confused. You're a big help! I will always refer to this final text . I hope you get enough sleep. Best regards, NEKOQ
Hello, Flick Thank you for your correction.You're very kind but that's too much. To tell the truth, I submitted this work to a japanese teacher before you. I have found a good match teacher since I used IDIY the first time. Sometimes japanese teachers suggested unconvinced things. I have wanted to make sure them. In this post, some points you corrected were a japanese teacher's suggestion. Especially, about starting "But", I agree with you. I thought that it was time to stop finding teachers for which I spent much points of IDIY. I already found two reliable japanese teachers, and I should ask native teachers to correct. Although your texts are a little hard for me, this is a good chance of learning new words and expressions. Regards, NEKOQ
Dear Teacher Flick, Thank you very much for your quick reply and accurate advice. It was a great help and I'm deffinitely looking forward to work with you again! Best regards, T-aku
Teacher Flick, Thank you so much for your detailed explanation. I am looking forward to taking your lesson again.
