Dear Teacher Emily san Thank you for your correction. The alternatives that you extended are very informative. I'll take care when I use "which"or "that." Thank you again.
Dear Emily, I appreciate your advice! Have a lovely weekend. Mashroom
Thank you for your detailed feedback! It was easy to follow and very helpful as always. I’m sorry for my late reply. I got COVID-19 last week, so I couldn’t check your message.
Thank you for your explanations and suggestions. I look forward to taking your lesson again!
Thank you for your detailed feedback. It was easy to follow and very helpful as always! I will try to use the phrases you introduced me to change the level of formality.
Dear Teacher Emily san Thank you for your prompt edits and answers to my questions. Your advice is very informative and helps me learn natural English. "Have a family" instead of "hold a family" is new to me. I have never assumed that "hold" didn't fit in this context" because, judging from the translation in Japanese, "hold" is more suitable. The way for me to become a advanced learner is for IDIY to provide me with such chances as you extended to me this time. Am I using " the way sytax" right? Best regards,
Dear Emily, I appreciate your advice. Your explanation was easy to understand, and the alternative sentences you suggested ware helpful for me. Have a lovely weekend. Mashroom
Thank you for your feedback. It was very detailed and easy to follow. It’s still difficult for me to tell whether a noun I am using is countable or uncountable, so your suggestions were helpful. Thanks again!
Thank you for your explanations and suggestions. In the last sentence, I wanted to say “I need to secure eight hours of sleep.” I look forward to taking your lesson again.
My apologies for the late reply. Thank you for your explanations and suggestions. I look forward to taking your lesson again.
Thank you for your feedback. Your detailed suggestions were easy to follow and very helpful as always!
Teacher Emily san Thank you kindly for your promt response and other edits and explanations you extended. They are kind and informative, among which I'm interested in next ones. "the “good personal hygiene” issue" because "the " defines and modifies a noun, therefore "issue "is required. How logical English is! "due to the fact that the rules could not be kept as scheduled" This phrase sounds me smart, I like it. Mr.IE
Thank you for your feedback. Your detailed comments were easy to understand and very helpful as usual!
Teacher Emily san Thank you for your kind answer and "consideration." you put on your edits. I see the natural flow of the preposition "by" and the clearer meaning of "for up to." "I will be very grateful if you can send me this information,” I love this sentence. "Dear, title and last name would be particularly appropriate if you had never met the person." I see , that interests me very much. Best regards,
Thank you for correcting my essay. Your explanations were very detailed and easy to understand!
