

Dear CeeJay-san, Thank you for proofreading my work! I appreciate you pointing out the expressions that, although grammatically correct, were slightly stilted. I wasn’t entirely sure how to use colons and semicolons either, so your careful corrections were very helpful. I look forward to reading your comments again. Best Regards, Ton-chan

Dear CeeJay, Thank you for your corrections. The various corrections and rephrasing are beneficial. I look forward to your corrections again in the next edition! Best regards, Hiroyuki031

Dear CeeJay, Thank you for your corrections. The various corrections and rephrasing are beneficial. I look forward to your corrections again in the next edition! Best regards, Hiroyuki031

Thank you for your feedback.

Dear CeeJay-san, Thank you very much for the feedback! As you pointed out, I was so focused on writing in a formulaic style that I was worried my writing ended up sounding robotic. I’ll keep the paraphrases you suggested in mind and work on making my writing more flexible. I look forward to reading your comments again. Best regards, Ton-chan

Dear CeeJay, Thank you for your corrections. The various corrections and rephrasing are beneficial. I look forward to your corrections again in the next edition! Best regards, Hiroyuki031

Thank you for your feedback.

Thank you for your feedback.

Dear CeeJay, Thank you for your corrections. The various corrections and rephrasing are beneficial. I look forward to your corrections again in the next edition! Best regards, Hiroyuki031

Dear CeeJay, Thank you for your corrections. The various corrections and rephrasing are beneficial. I look forward to your corrections again in the next edition! Best regards, Hiroyuki031

Dear CeeJay, Thank you for your corrections. The various corrections and rephrasing are beneficial. I look forward to your corrections again in the next edition! Best regards, Hiroyuki031

Dear CeeJay-san, Thank you very much for the feedback! Seeing such polished and varied paraphrases that I would never have thought of myself was very helpful. I plan to study the paraphrases again you shared so that I can use them effectively myself in future. I look forward to reading your comments again. Best regards, Ton-chan

Dear CeeJay, Thank you for your corrections. The various corrections and rephrasing are beneficial. I look forward to your corrections again in the next edition! Best regards, Hiroyuki031

Dear CeeJay, Thank you for your corrections. The various corrections and rephrasing are beneficial. I look forward to your corrections again in the next edition! Best regards, Hiroyuki031

Dear CeeJay, Thank you for your corrections. The various corrections and rephrasing are beneficial. I look forward to your corrections again in the next edition! Best regards, Hiroyuki031