

Dear Kim, Thank you for reviewing my study. I had a tendency to translate Japanese directly, but being advised to say “better ways” instead of “the better way” made me realize that it sounds more natural. Sincerely, Cajaroa.

Dear Kim, Thank you for your advice. I learned how to naturally choose between negative and affirmative sentences, how to use “because” and “but,” and that I shouldn’t overuse “does” for emphasis. Sincerely, Cajaroa.

Dear Kim, Your explanation of pronunciation was very helpful. Thank you also for the advice on how to use “instead.” Sincerely, Cajaroa.

Dear Kim Thank you for you checking my study. I understood that “people” is plural, while “no one” is treated as singular, and that word choice (such as “tacky”) should be considered depending on the tone and style of the text. Sincerely, Cajaroa.

Dear Kim, Thank you for reviewing and advising my study. I understand some natural expressions. And I have never known that use "are" instead of "have". This makes the sentence stronger. I will fix it from next time. Sincerely. Cajaroa.

Dear Kim Thank you for your advice. I'm impressive for "in the case of" can be simplified to "with." I wasn't able to look up that expression. I still keep writing simple and easy-to-understand sentences. Best Regards. Cajaroa.

Dear Kim Thank you for checking my study. I understand your feedback about the I need to clearly state the subject. and fully come to see my subject complexed, after giving it some thought. Sincerely, Cajaroa.

Dear Kim Thank you for reviewing my writing. I realize a subtle difference in meaning or nuance in grammar. I will choose words, or grammar thoughtfully. Best Regards. Cajaroa.

Dear Kim Thank you for reviewing my writing. I recognized my sentence are complicated. I'll try to write simply and clarity. Cajaroa.

Dear Kim Thank you for reviewing my study. I understand that my words adjust the meaning of sentence correctly. and some mistakes on grammar(keeping in my mind to choose intransitive verb or transitive verb) I look forward to your guidance again in the future. Cajaroa.

Dear Kim Thank you for quick response. I checked your advice about natural phrase, to choose correct words, and I will improve my english wrighting with it. I’m appreciate it. Cajaroa.

Dear Kim Thank you for your feedback on my writing. I have never known "since" means connect the ideas without starting a new sentence. I'm appreciate it. Best wishes Cajaroa.

Dear Kim, Thank you for your corrections. It was so helpful for me. I will try my best to write better sentences! Ayane_AN

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Thank you very much for polishing my writing.