Thank you for correcting my essay. Your explanations were easy to understand, and the alternative expressions you showed were very helpful!
Dear Annaliese, Thank you very much for your really helpful feedback! I learned new ideas and tips about how to write neutral and nice sentences to a manager. Those were really helpful ideas because I communicate with my French boss in English. He can speak in Japanese, but can't write, so we write in English. Have a lovely day!
Dear Ms. Annaliese Thank you for correcting my essay! I learned a lot.
Dear Annaliese, Thank you very much for your really helpful and kind feedback! I learned how I could have expressed better after having read your corrections and detailed explanations. Alternative expressions will also help me for future use. I noted them. Have lovely holidays & Olympics!
Thank you for correcting my essay. Your explanations were easy to understand. I had not known the difference between “efforts” and “practice”, but from your explanation I learned why I should not use “effort” in this essay.
Thank you very much for your help.
