初めての投稿で久しぶりの英作文。どんな添削、コメントが返ってくるかと思っておりましたが、とても丁寧で、私の文意を変えることなく、ナチュラルな英文に直してくださいました。次回への意欲も引き出してくださるコメントに感激です。引き続き英作文頑張って参ります。
Thanks for your comment about "articles." Even in this sentence, either, I am not sure if "articles" are right or not.
Thank you so much, teacher leahook. I've read your message, it's so encouragement and helpful. I'm go ahead to study so hard!
Thanks for checking my essay. I wanted to know differences between clothes and clothing in usage.
Thank you very much. I couldn't have done it without your help.
Thank you very much. I couldn't have done it without your help.
Dear leahook, Thank you for your comment. I have just started writing essays. I didn't have confidence in writing. After reading your comment, I feel writing is fun. Have a nice week ahead. Regards, Naka
Thank you for your thoughtful comments! Tommy,
Hello leahook, Thank you for the comments. You encouraged me a lot!
Thanks for you correction. "Related verses of a chapter of a book" equal "where to read in the bible." Therefore, "that is" or something else is necessary between "related verses of a chapter of a book" and "where to read in the Bible." Am I right?
Dear Teacher leahook, Thank you for correcting my writing. I am grad you're coming to Japan. Good choice! May is one of the best seasons. I live in Osaka and often go to Kyoto. If possible, I wish I could help you with hanging around the towns. I hope you will have a great time. Best, lisbeth
Thank you for your detailed corrections and helpful advises!
質問に丁寧に答えていただきありがとうございます。 大変勉強になりました。
質問に丁寧に答えていただきありがとうございます。 大変勉強になりました。
Thank you for your great feedback and comment. I really appreciate your help.
